|Reviews for The Pain|
| roseeyes chapter 66 . 3/30
I loved your story so much! Oddly enough, my favorite part was when Kagome was killed and all that surrounded her death. Your OCs are hilarious, and the depictions of everyone's future selves are awesome. Great stuff, looking forward to the sequel!
| roseeyes chapter 37 . 3/23
This chapter was so sweet! I appreciate the way you wrote the consummation scene. Personally, I do not want to know x, y, and z of when a couple makes love - it defeats the purpose of imagination. You write emotions and feelings very well, painting a picture for your audience rather than simply telling them what happened, and that's rare in this day and age. Looking forward to the rest of this story!
| roseeyes chapter 3 . 3/19
I'm enjoying this so far! You possess an easy, flowing style, and do well in showing your audience a character's thoughts and feelings rather than simply telling them. :) Curious as to whom the voice belongs to and why she's hearing it. Great work!
| 50ShadesOfAwkward chapter 1 . 2/14
Thus story is probably one of the vest that I've ever read. The character development was amazing, the story line was incredible, and the lemon chapters hit me right where it hurts. Amazing. looking forward to reading more if your stories. :D
| InuKags4Evr chapter 66 . 4/13/2017
OMG! this is a great story! I don't think I have any tears left, but it was so worth it. Loved it!
| Shoesarecool chapter 54 . 11/30/2016
Omg! So happy that kikiyo saved him!
| Shoesarecool chapter 14 . 11/23/2016
Omg I love that he asked her that and she said yes!
| Min-chan17 chapter 66 . 9/6/2016
I love you, read this baby in 3 days cause i couldn't stop and because i was on my toes in every chap, thanks for this darling
| MyFluffleFix chapter 27 . 8/20/2016
Do you know how long it took for me to realize your name was Captain applesauce? I think my brain actually stuttered. Great story tho.
| EeveeGirl23 chapter 66 . 4/30/2016
Words can't say how much I loved this story. Every part of your story was amazing. It's hard to find story's like this. I just hope the next story I find will be as amazing as this one but that won't happen. Stories like this one are hard to find. Thank you for this story!
| FanaticallyInLove chapter 57 . 8/2/2015
I think I could see why people wanted to know this but I absolutely did not. There wasn't a purpose other than morbid curiosity that could have been sated with a one shot it didn't need to be here because it no longer matters. It's still well written and we'll done I'm not disputing that in the least but it didn't need to be here.
| beachgirl5647 chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
You are an absolutely fantastic writer! I throughly enjoyed this whole story and thought that it was very orginial and creative. The way you described everything, from the thoughts to the feelings to the scenes, was fantastic. I hope you continue to write whether its fanfiction or other types of writing because you have a great talent for it!
| FanaticallyInLove chapter 7 . 8/1/2015
I'm not usually in the habit of reviewing chapters of something that was finished so long ago I usually wait until the end but I loved this chapter so much I just had to say something. In every fanfiction I've read where Kagome is upset about everyone having to save her all the time no one has ever handled it as perfectly as you have, fantastic.
| QueenTatooine chapter 66 . 5/11/2015
Very nice story. Its hard to find a good Inuyasha fanfic I haven't already read. Good job on this.
| InuRiotGrrl chapter 66 . 2/13/2015
Wow...I have to say this is definitely among my most favorite of all the Inuyasha fanfictions I've ever read!
Wonderful job portraying the characters, an excellent plot, great dialogue, and I loved every word! I loved how the youkai plus Rin survived all this time. It was an awesome surprise when you it was first revealed in the story that there are in fact youkai in the modern world (I can't remember just when that was, though.) Of course, it's sad that they had to say goodbye to Sango and Miroku, but InuKag just couldn't stay in the past, for like you said, they would risk altering too much in those 500 years they were supposed to have been dead for.
I just love this story. I'll have to reread it again sometime. And I love the epilogue, with their kids! This was probably my favorite chapter to read. I like how it had several time skips, rather than the entire epilogue taking place at one particular point in their lives.
Hiro saying "fucking kitsune" while he was a little baby...hehe. They are SO Inuyasha's boys. :)