Reviews for War Stories |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw yay, lovely |
![]() ![]() Slightly confusing, but kind of touching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() incredibly loverly. amzing how you can milk so much emotion out of so many simple sentences. i just spent about twenty minutes i should have been using to write an english paper thats probably gonna have me up all night, but i'm so happy that i did. totally worth it. xoxo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really lovely piece. It captures the Bebop-y feeling quite well, and I really like your Faye. Excellent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it, love it, love it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. I felt sorry for that kid, Faye was kinda mean to him. Not that I blame her- it was a painful subject. You got Faye in character, and it was all Bebop-style. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how Fayes feelings turned out and for once in awhile I didn't felt like she is OOC. It was very Bebop-like, so a very good fanfiction. Very well! The only thing thats disturbing me is when Spike called Faye, because it came so suddenly, there was no noise and anything and I first had to think about on which screen she was looking, that was really weird oO. Laissez les bons temps rouler. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. |
![]() ![]() Loved your fic! _ The ending's great, and it gives sense to Faye's words. Well written and excellent characterization. _ Keep it up, Cowboy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story! i luved it...to bad its a one shot but i understand..still good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job, very nice. Smooth and full of emotional clarity-you volcalize Faye's whole mode really well; It's believable, and with an un-sappy ending that made me smile :) |