|Reviews for A Doc's Eye View|
| Szors chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Awwww! A wounderful take on what could have happened, if the series finished with Haunted. I can totally see it happening. It made me appriciate Twilight all the more for it though. It really is said, at least form Docs point of view, I bet Suze and Jesse are really happy. I eally loved, that it was this short but composed, with the lilttle details that told more, than long descriptions would have. My favourite was the white knight moment, but it is really hard to chose just one, the dancing in the living room and Doc knocking always is really close second and third.
A realy thought out fic, with wonderful details and IC characters. I mean, I could see Father D being disapproving, but going ahead with the ceremony, despite his misgivings, and Doc was a really good character to show us their relationship, because he knows the longest, and he is really observant. I especially liked how his view on their relationship changes as he grows older.
Thank you for this, an instant favourite. Keep up the good work! ( and I'm going to check out now, if all of your other stories are this good)
| catgirld86 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
This was sad, but really sweet. I liked it.
| Lovelikethemovies chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
This is a very interesting take on happenings not documented in the books.. go Doc!
| The Magnificent Kiwi chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Oh wow. I actually have tears in my eyes :) And I'm sure it's not from my head cold either. Excellent fic...it's going right in my favourites!...wow :).
| Maiden of the Moon chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I am incredibly impressed. Your writing style is flawlessly beautiful, the mental pictures are gorgeous, and you somehow manage to make each little ficlet both hauntingly sad and joyfully happy. I hope to read more from you soon!
| The Blasphemous Contessa chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
pretty cool, excepting the part where Jesse isn't a ghost anymore . . . not that you probably even check this anymore, but oh well.
| De chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
That was...perfect. What else do you want me to say besides that?
| TwentyFourCookies chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Heart... breaking... painfully... must get... chocolate...
Well, how do you respond to something that just got right down there and squashed you compeletly? I mean, to me, the biggest romantic walking earth, loving a ghost seemed totally cool! Then I read this... and now it's just something tragic, yet all the more romantic. I was really feeling for Doc, wondering what his "sister" was doing with her life. I bet the teenage angst (which I'm still living, by the way) really didn't help things. And the little quotes and titles you had titling (is that even a word?) the stories really added the touch, although I probably couldn't tell you why they seemed so familiar (I should pay more attention in English). But yeah, when you get down to it... Wow...
| Em Fargo chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
no fair! no matter how many "a"s and "w"s i put in2 my aws, it cuts them all out! *sighs* but its so cute! and sad! and happy! how do u do it? get published, girl, get published. *sighs* aw aaww awawawawawawaw
| Hermione88220 chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
aw! How cute! this was great! Good Job!
| somebody290 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Aw... that was SO cute :)
| The Dark Shark chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Too beautiful...I feel happy for Suze yet sorry for Doc and all the people who will never know how happy her life has been. You make Doc's POV so believable, just like you did Jesse's in For My Sins - which was excellent.
I hope you'll continue writing these awesome one-shots...they make me feel things most other 20-chapter stories can't.
| LolliliciousLolly chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Oh my God...
That - that was -
Observations. That's all they seemed to be. But each one contained stories of joy that some of the most detailed fanfictions can't tap into.
I want to cry, but I don't want to at the same time. I feel like I definitely could, though...
The happiness that you described so objectively was just so perfect. That was BEAUTIFUL.
Wow, wow, WOW.
...I'm not even going to bother saying poor Suze. That's all she ever wanted. All she dreamed. She was happy, with Jesse, and they were so deeply in love that not even mortality or immortality could come between them, even in holy matrimony.
WOW, WOW, WOW.
...you HAVE to write more. That last thing you wrote? For My Sins? That is one of my FAVOURITE ONE-SHOTS OF ALL TIME. The passion it showed has yet to be matched by any other authors on here.
You are a legend.
Please, write other things. One-Shots. That's all you need, to get someone like me feel like crying.
You are powerful with your words.
| Esodes08 chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Oh wow. To be David and have to go through all of this. To see his sister struggle like that. To have to tell his own mother why Suze had a marriage license, but no husband. Wow. Just wow. It's just so moving. How you have put it into small little sections. Just like that. It's breif, but oh so powerful. Do not continue. Leave it as a oneshot and let us sit on these words for a while let us think about their meanings. Thank goodness I'm in such a good mood right now, or I might have started crying. (mind you, I'm an extreemly emotional girl on most days) Thankyou. Another fabulous insight on the pain of Susannah Simon.
| maddrummer27 chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
This was so sad!
I really liked it though.