Reviews for Final Chess Piece
Smile chapter 9 . 2/20/2019
Amazing, I really liked the idea about high school without romance and full of angst, I liked Benjamin's character, I hope you focus more on Battosai personality than rouroni or give it a balance in Battosai's favor,
So kyosato is the friend?
Hmm. I hope you update or answer me,
My email:shinelilac3 at Gmail dot com
Guest chapter 9 . 10/18/2012
Plz plz plz plz plz update
Y.I.D chapter 9 . 7/22/2009
Woo, this is very good. I the backstory was brought in in a good realistic manner and I paticularly enjoy the kenshin vs shinsengumi inyteractions because you got them right how they are enemies and yet not quiet yet trying to kill each other. I look forard to an update.
vincents1lover chapter 9 . 7/1/2009
siberia88 chapter 9 . 6/2/2008
I love this story! Very original. Hope you eventually get to continue the story! :)
catgrl106 chapter 9 . 2/23/2008
This story is really awesome! Are you still planning on continuing it? I mean, it's kinda been over a year since you last updated it. I'd really like it if you continued it!
KuroKage1717 chapter 9 . 5/4/2007
incredibly interesting! please do update soon - i wanna know what happens next!
Heart of Ice chapter 9 . 4/9/2007
UPDATE!(screams battle cry, and everyone goes like -U)
KuroitsukiNoMai chapter 9 . 1/1/2007
great chapter! i'm so glad that kenshin didn't get hurt!


Surrendered to Christ chapter 9 . 12/26/2006
Uwaa! You're from Hong Kong? I didn't know that! "Nei ho"! (Hee...don't know if I spelled that right, but at least it's not "ni hao ma?", ne?") Hooray for Cantonese people who can't speak PuTongHua to save their lives, just like me!

It sucks about the exams, though...are you in form five, and facing the CE? Because if so...I truly feel sorry for you. It's an insanely inhuman amount of work.

It's great that you found time to work on this story, though. Great work! I look forward to more!

~Bai Bai for now :)
SzaharaTheSame chapter 9 . 12/25/2006
You know... I love you! Thanks for the update :D It was very much welcome!:) YAY!

I know what you are talking about I will also spend my time studying for a comprehensive exam! In Hungary half-term is pretty terrible in the uni. I am Hungarian-English major and on Hungarian major the Linguistic Comprehensive Exam is the demon for the whole population of the major, only the fanatics and the lucky pass it for the first time... This will be my first try, and I am facing this with the calmness of the chanceless, my room-mate cannot understand why I am so calm before exams! hah, freshman... oh, I rambled, sorry *sheepish grin*

I am so clueless where this story is going, everything is so fuzzy (Kiyosato and Aoshi and why Sano died, or did he really die?), but not because it is illogical... oh no... I understood everything up to now, but I still cannot link enough things to guess what will happen! And I love to make guesses privately and watch if they come true or not... so anyway! Thanks again! And Merry Chrsitmas!
Nekotsuki chapter 9 . 12/25/2006
And glitches aside, this is still a great chapter. Not to mention it's great seeing something from you again. Er... never mind you could have put this up a month ago if not for my messing you around. . Sorry.

Did I mention this is the best high school fic around? If not the only one that's worth reading?
ahou incarnate chapter 8 . 3/3/2006
I'm really liking this story and I can't wait till the next chapter!And I think I might know who the Tokugawa kid is _~ - we'll have to wait and see, huh?
Reiko chapter 4 . 2/28/2006
i was very interested in reading your story due to your excellent summary. after reading four chapters of it, i have decided to read no more because of the way you are writing this style. i HATE that you're pulling this "speaking to his soul" shit. and after having kenshin denying for FOUR chapters who he really is, why would he randomly admit to being the hitokiri battousai to random men getting out of a car. he didn't even TRY to deny who he was. if he was really in hiding...he WOULD HAVE because what if those guys had belonged to saitou? then what? then saitou would have known and kenshin would be done.

fucking ridiculous.
Laegdin chapter 8 . 2/27/2006
And so the mystery thickens. I'm very curious about the curse; the world you've created seems rooted very much in reality and then there's this magical curse that bind Katsura and Kenshin. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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