|Reviews for Broken Hearts|
| katie chapter 45 . 2/26/2013
are u making a sequil or adding any more to it as its a great story
| Jazzy Jay and Cindy C-Mirph chapter 28 . 1/24/2013
im so sorry for your loss
| Jazzy Jay and Cindy C-Mirph chapter 16 . 1/23/2013
| Jazzy Jay and Cindy C-Mirph chapter 12 . 1/23/2013
the last part was...AWESOME!
| Jazzy Jay and Cindy C-Mirph chapter 6 . 1/21/2013
should have put kagome slapping the shmit out of kikyo
| Jazzy Jay and Cindy C-Mirph chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
| alise45647 chapter 45 . 1/15/2013
best ending ever
| Blood plus14 chapter 45 . 11/22/2012
Awww i love the story it was cute. :))
| alysha.a.kent chapter 45 . 7/21/2012
i LOVED your work on this one! you did a great job! they should make books from your fanfics..lol keep up the good work!
| Lovekit chapter 45 . 2/4/2011
Great job ... NO DROP DEAD JOB SO GOOD OR GREAT OS WHATEVER I DON"T EVEN KNOW HOW TO PUT IT SO HERE IN MATH TERMS 99 trillien to the power of 9999 SO GREAT You are a GREAT auther Keep up the GREAT WORK
| courtborges chapter 45 . 1/7/2011
My name is Courtney and I just recently finished reading your fanfic "Broken Hearts" and I absolutely loved it! You are and amazing writer and that fanfic really made my day, so much so that I came up with this idea...
I think at one point in "Broken Hearts" you hinted that Naraku was screwing Kikyo? Anyways, it would take place 15 years in the future, Kagome and Inuyasha are still happily married, as well as Sango and Miroku. Both couples' children are 15 years old now, Sayuri has grown up to be a beautiful teenager with Inuyasha's violet eyes and Kagome's silky, raven hair. Turns out Miroku and Sango's child is a boy (to be name by you), now 15 he is bold and outgoing like his father, but caring yet strong like his mother. Sayuri and Sang/Mir's boy are best friends and he is VERY good to her and protective of her. Everything seems fine but little does our happy group know that Kikyo discovered she was pregnant with Naraku's child the day he was arrested. Naraku and Kikyo's child turns out to be a boy (to be named by you) and is 15 throughout the story also. Kikyo and her son visit Naruku in jail every weekend as the boy grows up, thus he knows why his father was locked away: IT WAS ALL BECAUSE OF THAT BITCH KAGOME AND HER HUSBAND! Kikyo and Naraku's son devises a plan to get revenge for having his family torn apart: he will focus on Sayuri, he will get his revenge by getting close to her. Once the gang finds out Kikyo and her son are back in town and the son of Naraku is now horribly harassing Sayuri no one is happy about it-especially Sayuri's best friend, Miroku and Sango's son. While protecting Sayuri from Kikyo/Narak's son throughout the story the friends become closer until the question arises: Will Sayuri and Sang/Mir's son ever be more?
(I say yes xD)!
But you can swing it however you want, that's just the story line, I hope you like and consider my idea. I know you have many fans and reviewers and I'm sure they'd love to hear how "Broken Hearts" can contiue and then end, I know I would! I saw that you have many projects on your mind, maybe you can give this one a chance? :) If not, it's ok, maybe I can find time to write my own fanfic one day! You inspired me.
Thanks for your time,
| parisadaja chapter 45 . 8/4/2010
omg, this story was the bomb-digity.! i love it soo much cus its beast.!
| lg317 chapter 17 . 6/23/2010
wow...people are really serious about this whole dance thing...anywho, great story!
| dog girl 1 chapter 45 . 5/31/2010
that was the most romantic,sad,and other words that i cant discribe and i wanted to know what happend to songo and what i8s her baby is it a boy or a girl that was the best story and i want to say can you pleas write some more thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much.
| Honavi aka Mammaws Angel Baby chapter 45 . 1/9/2010
awesome job! u did great on the story, its like the best one i've read with this type story line!