Reviews for Sunshine in the Dark
Beaner883 chapter 3 . 3/30/2014
you are such an amazing author i was so sucked into this book that i thought that this was the end of the first chapter until i looked at the name. keep being amazing
Guest chapter 18 . 8/26/2011
AWESOME fic! very difficult to forget! the chapter with the swimming pool incident had me running around in a fit of some kind! truely amazing fic!
TrueLoveIsHardToFind chapter 18 . 7/12/2011
Why are you such an amazing writer? Gah I'm so jealous and ur ideas are just mind blowing!
Bellatrixxx chapter 18 . 7/11/2011
Ah wow that was sooo sweet I loved this story! Keep up the good work, and keep writing! You have such a talent!
Bellatrixxx chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
Haha! Siriu's hair.. that was pure genius!
Bellatrixxx chapter 4 . 7/11/2011
Wow! I loved this chapter! It was soooo funny I was almost crying with laughter! Can't wait to read the rest!
Invisible-Angel-Of-Shadows chapter 16 . 6/23/2011
ooohhhhh. This one made me sad. And poor Lily! I knew ol' Voldy was nasty, but I've actually thought of him as a rapist. However, I trust you to fix Lily and James relationship before the end of the story.

I love how you write, your vocabulary is nice and large, just how it should be. I have a feeling that I'll like more stories from you.
mrs.prongs chapter 18 . 2/4/2010
omg! loved it!1
sti chapter 18 . 1/11/2010
I liked this story very much. Because:

1. you write very well, I like your style

2. it was funny and cute

3. most stories describe JL fights, hate, jealousy... and admitting love comes on the end of the story. But you wrote about their love and relationship through whole story, it was simply amazing
Jordie chapter 9 . 3/31/2009
I don't get the big deal with swimming at Christmas me and my cousins do it all the time. But then again we do live in Australia. Anyways I am really enjoying the story
mayriss chapter 18 . 3/15/2009
So, I am going to start off by saying that I absolutley loved your story. It was so amazing, and the love between Lily and James gives me shivers. That said, I do think that you have some major plot holes. For example, it seems to me that when Lily escaped from Baramore the first time, that Dark Lord would be a little more cautious the next time he had captured Lily to not let her escape, and I know that she had help from Snape, but it doesn't seem realistic to me. Your whole plot was centered around Lily and James and their relationship, but you really downplayed Voldemort, and he almost seemed trivial to Lily. Also, we really never learned what happened to Lily and her parents, so Lily never really had a chance to work out her issues, she was just kind of better all of a sudden, and I think the story would be so much better if we saw that relationship development between James and Lily, and it would be so much more real if the story didn't seen so fiary tale like, and it was more grounded in reality. But I still thought the story was great, those are just some tips to really take your story to the next level. Great Job though, I really enjoyed reading it!
mayriss chapter 11 . 3/15/2009
I really love your story. It's so real, I feel what Lily and James feel, their love makes my heart melt, and I really like your take on James's family, it's unique. I do feel like you kind of rushed James and Lily's relationship with the whole bond, giving thier hearts to each other, and stopping the plate before it hit Lily, because I think the moment they realized they had a bond would be more special if the had a stronger relationship and the reader could see the obvious bond; they really started dating only recently, even if they have been in love with each other for a while.
TheFabMax chapter 18 . 8/28/2008
OMG! this was so good. i'm not gonna lie, it is impossible to find a decent lily/james fic, and yours are phenomenal! i love love LOVE it! good work!
Knight 03 chapter 18 . 6/28/2008
Really really sweet story!

-Knight
AnimeandMangaLover chapter 18 . 4/13/2008
amazing story! i love it. _
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