|Reviews for Soul Tamers 01:The truth is unreal|
| xXxSoratoxXx65 not logged in chapter 23 . 8/27/2005
I love this story! good chapter by the way!please continue soon!
| theladyknight chapter 23 . 8/25/2005
*yawns* Sorry, soccer just started up and it was really hot out there during practice. I needed some good reading to keep me awake, which is what I found here.
I like how Sora's past and memories got tied into things here. It was interesting to see the softer side of things instead of the harsh reality we're usually shown. So did the ceremony work? I hope so. And Valentine's Day next chapter? I wonder what that'll bring.
| SaffireStarz chapter 23 . 8/25/2005
Great chapter Ari. Was it hard to describe their outfits? I know I have trouble describing outfits. T_T (probably because when I visualize how I want them to look, I think of the most strangest outfits. hehehe)
the most important person to Sora is her dad? well, i admit i was a bit surprised (and when you wrote that it was also surprising that it was her dad that was protecting her from the darkness) but i wouldn't blame her. i just expected it to be either Chris, Yamato or even her mother.
good chapter, i enjoyed it.
| xXxSoratoxXx65 chapter 22 . 7/21/2005
Hey Ari chan that was great! But short I really like all ur stories! Please continue
| SaffireStarz chapter 22 . 7/21/2005
another chapter done by the great Ari! Lol, great job. can't wait till the next chappie _
| windedlove chapter 22 . 7/20/2005
wah! It was so short! :( I'm deprived...lol Please update soon! I'm interested! You have a knack for that...ending just at a time when the reader stays interested...a mark of a truely great writer...update soon please!
| theladyknight chapter 22 . 7/20/2005
Yeah, I get what you're saying. Things like that would make posting stories much easier, but...shit happens. What can you do?
Intense chapter. I can see why the rating jumped up to "M". So are "Jun" and "Ryo" actually gone or will they be paying the group another visit? And will the ceremony work?
Nice chapter. *sighs* I have so much to do today. I need to finish a chapter of one of my stories so I can post it, find and then pack for Canada, as I leave tomorrow. Sorry my review isn't any longer! Update soon!
| SaffireStarz chapter 21 . 7/18/2005
Can't wait till you update! I love this story _
| windedlove chapter 21 . 7/7/2005
Totally couldn't review yesterday! I figured I'd try again today (the 7th) and I couldn't do it signed in...grr...anyways...thought this was an AWESOME chapter! Personally this is one of my absolute faves, but the other story you have out, Izulde Academy (or something to that spelling) is really really really AWESOME! I love these both. Please do update them. Also, I said it in the other review, but I'll say it here too: Goodbye Joey and Good Luck! Ari, I'm sure you'll do just fine with the chapters. I love these fics! Update them soon. You have such awesome stories!
| KoumiLocc chapter 21 . 7/6/2005
For some reason I can't review! Did you just redo 21 lol that's what i'm thinccin mane.. Don't worry about Sorato haterz they can't touch us like sayin they heard of Jyoura but never read it.. If they do then fucc them, its time to put a blue-rag or grey-rag and do the Crip thang or Rascal thing cuz.. Why Joes Girl is nerdy but stil coo cuz she dress coo, Peace Koumi Fan foe Life and your songs was all freaky mane- come on Usher at least Sorato fans have to put some luv songs even if I thincc Usher looks like a fag yo and beyonce is wacc but wouldn't mind that gangsta song shiet later on the chaps homie...Oh Monica is still tight did you know she used to gangbang?.
| theladyknight not logged in chapter 21 . 7/6/2005
I already reviewed for chapter 21, back when you had that extra note in so it won't let me review logged in. Good chapter. Bits and pieces of it were confusing, mainly just the new people added in, but I think I have them straightened out.
So Yumi doesn't like Ryo either? Why's that? I already knew of her-and everyone else's-hatred for Jun, but Ryo was kind of unexpected. Who has the other soul item...possibly Brett? I guess we'll find out later.
I always thought "She's No You" would be the perfect song from Matt to Sora in the whole obsessive fangirls at his concert senario. It really fit. It kind of sucks that you can't have the lyrics for it in their though. Oh well, at least I know how it goes. Nice chapter. Update soon!
| windedlove chapter 21 . 6/27/2005
UPDATE! I'M LOVING IT! I can't stay, but let's just say...I'm adding(or readding) this to my absolute favs! update!
| theladyknight chapter 21 . 6/26/2005
Wow...I'd say that gave a bit of an explanation of what was going on. But I have to admit, I was a bit lost at times. (Could be cause I went camping last night and got about 4 hours of sleep though). So are they going to perform whatever that ritual thing is on Sora to free her from the darkness? Hopefully so.
One hundred chapters? Good Lord. I liked adding Gozaboro Kaiba in as MaloMyotismon. It fit in with the whole Yugi-Oh tie in thing. Nice chapter. Hope things start to improve. Update soon.