|Reviews for My Little Secret|
| Kixen chapter 14 . 1/13/2016
read this story so many times and the thing that saddens me the most is that it will forever remain incomplete.
This has to be one of the best ranma/Nabiki stories I have red if not these best one I have red.
| Meech Macko chapter 13 . 1/21/2014
The best Ranma x Nabiki fic...but its a big bummer it this fic is just dead.
If Nabiki planned out to go college and manipulated Ranma to study hard to go to city college away from Nerima ( like her same place)...things could have worked out.
The Nerima gang wouldn't be able to follow them IF they planned out.
Too bad this good fic is just DEAD.
| steelneil chapter 14 . 11/22/2011
AWWW COME ON UPDATE ALREADY...
Seriously i've read it like infinite times already, bloody 4 years and nothing still,makes me wonder if you are alive or no...
Well forgoing my impatience, i would like to say that your fic has by far the best character depth among all the Ranma fics I've come across. However there is a nagging doubt at some corner of my brain that says , you are being unfair to the Saotome's...
I mean come on, I see Nabiki reminiscing about her past, breaking her Ice-Barrier and all,
Kasumi delving in her thoughts becoming more motherly, and showing more realistic emotions like guilt, etc(i really like that), Akane doesn't introspect much yet she is shown to be caring and a bit understanding and Soun trying to undo his mistakes.
Whereas I've not seen Ranma or Genma think back, at anytime. I mean if you consider their situation, Ranma may have had the toughest life of all, if not the most then maybe on par with the Tendos.
Leaving his mom and civilization to train at the whims of his father, he may have yearned for love like that of a normal family and when he finally finds his yearning quenched among the Tendos, the present emotional turmoil between him and the sisters, further making him feel lonely. Definitely, you have showed Ranma's features and his introspection into his present feelings for Nabiki, but I still feel that his complete thought process is not revealed.
And surely Genma must feel something, remorse maybe for the Necko-Ken or about their journey which ate into Ranma's childhood,etc. He can have a father-son tête à tête with Ranma or something similar, signifying their character depth.
I am not ranting though, who knows you may have actually planned all that, and maybe not cocentrating on Saotomes helps emphasize on the Tendos. Either way "PLEASE" update soon...
| Collin Oshea chapter 14 . 9/19/2011
Great chapter, keep up the good work.
| Sonic Wooten chapter 14 . 8/28/2011
Very Interesting Story, I like the depth of the Main Characters lives and am very much looking forward to where this story goes. Thank you for writing such a good story!
| Hammerchuckery chapter 3 . 5/16/2011
Hilarious, but I just need to ignore the Engrish.
| Meech Macko chapter 14 . 4/12/2011
Dude are you ever going to update this one decent Ran/nabiki its a great fic i gotta tell ya and i know you aint good with fight scenes but since Ranma defeated Saffron(Demigod) he has gotta be the most damn powerful martial artist ...right?
| feernando chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
i really liked this chapter it was really good all that emotion i think that you should continue this because it really good
| feernando chapter 13 . 1/19/2011
wow this chapter was really good
| feernando chapter 11 . 1/19/2011
the whole story was good but this chapter was amazing
| feernando chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
it was good
| griffenvamp chapter 14 . 10/12/2010
pl update please want to see how this truns out
| Skydragonkitten chapter 14 . 8/25/2010
i want to know what happens this is a good story... Please come back to it.
| griffenvamp chapter 14 . 8/9/2010
| rosstock chapter 14 . 7/29/2010
I love your story. XD