Reviews for What's Up
tippusmaximus chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Well, I loved it. I really liked how you (and the characters) treated the HG/SS thing-seriously, but with humor when necessary. Thanks for a great story!
VJA chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
I loved this! Very funny, and the only scenario in which I might actually be able to find HG/SS anywhere near plausible. Please continue!
auroraziazan chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
I'll have to do more later, but I absolutely promised myself I'd be off the computer at 10. It's very solid construction, often quite clever. I know you have an excuse for it, but this just isn't a very good Neville. He isn't at all in character (and again, you can only attribute so much to growing). I think the 'sex' line isn't your best. The dialog is pretty funny, but again, just feels rough. And there is way to much mean-spiritedness among the group. We often see tiffs and disagreements, but this didn't feel good. Sorry, hon, but you've done better.