I am going to check out the rewrite, hope you got through the Covid era without tragedy. A/Ns felt like reading a time capsule which was really cool.

Oh man, I hope the complete story is on ao3, I've never used the site so I hope I can find it lol.

I really enjoyed this story!

Holy shit I just realized the high ground didn't exist yet when this story was first made

The part about Revan was most fascinating and it does explain alot about that mythology. Revan was the overpowered protagonist writ large.

Anyway, hopefully I find more updates on your other page.

What is this ptsd bullshit? Constant emotional roller coster that doesn't reflect the actual Obi-wan character...so done with this.

Wow. That's actually...pathetic.

I am awed to see a fic 1 year older than me, wow

Initiate Kenobi... he's not even a Padawan apprentice to Qui-Gon yet... you really DID go all the way back to the beginning! Heck, farther!

Resurrection / Go Back in Time for a Do-Over Fics always leave me feeling wary. But... I will give this one a try, and see how I feel.

I was smiling throughout the whole chapter, thank you!

Wow, that chapter was great! Could have been really jarring to have that big of a time skip, but with the other perspectives earlier it worked flawlessly.

You also have a massive misspelling in your hair.

This chapter convinced me to continue reading. I guess when you started this fic an angsty start to time travel stories wasn’t as overused as it is now :)

Sorry me again.
Its weird the more I read it the more I think, Bruck would make a good Jedi now. He’s clearly wanted by the Mandolorians and passionate like them but the more you seem him interact with them the more he seems to remember what the Jedi are and why he loves them. He’s actually a really good teacher and its probably just me thinking this but after watching Feemor, I think he’d make a good Guard too. Which makes me wonder if people leave and enter the Guard by the will of the Force or they just assess based on record and do the best they can?

Honestly though Bruck seems quite fond of Obi Now. The brotherhood born in battle and what not.

Im wondering if in the next Jango/Obi-Wan debate he’ll remind him that agri corps assistance could’ve changed the terraform of Mandalore. It was a good speech between Kenobi and the Bothan Master about the nature of different sections of the corps. Delving into Wild Space and learning more about the Chiss might’ve changed how Thrawn interacted with the Galaxy.

I always love learning how terraforming and plant and food science work. Its like re-introduce a predator and it actually brings back different prey and then different plants or move a small body of water and millions of wild life pull through.
Its more then seeding clouds for weather in a desert. There is so much to farming. I geek out….I would totally want to see a Mythosaur. They got DNA from Mammoths, maybe they could find some ancient Mythosaur bones. I bet that crazy geneticist who helped stopped the clones from accelerated aging on that separatist planet could figure something out…or that evil guy who made the blue virus.

It would actually be cool to learn more about the Education corps and the Medical corps.

Its amazing they don’t all communicate more but then again the Force Sensitive only make up what .1%of the population and space is large. I suppose that stilsl mean there are several million Jedi at the time though.

I love how you break down your sentences in terms of action and verb and adjective placement. Just structurally its fun to read your work.

Oh my God are they going to run into any Galidraan predators on this hike?!
Looking back I wonder if it was all the loss that made Jango what he was by the time he commissioned his clone army and treated them like they were livestock or if there wasn’t something just intrinsically brutal to him.

I love the new Rewrite! It's amazing. Jango and Jax are so well done. I did not expect the familial development with Bruck which was a nice foil contrast to Obi Wans interaction.

Have you thought about a Ko-Fi or Patreaon account?

Its interesting having Feemor portrayed as a Knight Guard in an enjoyable way.

You fleshed out the Jedi order very well. Lots of people love the Mandolorians and Sith as time goes on and I fully like to pretend the last three movies didnt happen in star wars much like I pretend the Indiana Jones never occured, and I love the Jedi's creed more as I get older. My friend put Jedism on his dog tags for his religion. Im still not sure if he did it as joke or not I but i still laugh when I think of it. He liked to fuck with people.

I really dont know if Qui Gon is the best mentor for Obi-Wan even with all his recent incite into himself. The past is changing but that doesnt mean it can suddenly make even an old familial love work. But everything is different now. THere'd be new missions and eveything just a little different now.

I've wondered if Siri and Obi-Wan had found each other after order 66 if they'd gotten together.

As close in age as Jango and Obi-Wan are wouldnt it make a parenting dynamic difficult? They seem more like Vod. Though I suppose they are close enough for a really alarming parent/child relationship by the world standards. Also isnt he an adult at 13? But I guess Jango was older when Jaster adopted him too. I've never quite understood that dynamic.

I love the super creche master you introduced. Honestly your OCs are just fantastic. :D

Will Obi-Wan send someone to Tatoonie to collect Anakin when he's young?

How would the other True Mandolorians interact with Obi-want if he did become part of house Mereel? Especially since a bunch of them bullied him before?

ALso the Correlian Jedis are badass. Green is the way to go.

Do you think that he'll ever get to do some missions with Master Fey?

Also what caused the EMP strike at the temple? they never did seem to get to the bottom of it?

Is Maul with Sidious at this point? Is Ventress with her Master?

As much as we all love the clone troopers and my God shout out to Hevy and SPar, my favorite clone troopers but I wonder if the Galaxy might be ok without them having to be created in this particular timeline.

Do you think DOoku knows anyone specializing in making holocrons at the Temple?

Have you read Knights of the High Republic novels or ROnin yet?

ALl the best and keep it up!

So just to clarify, I'm assuming in this story Anikin won the duel on Mustafar? I need to go rewatch the movie, but I didn't think Anikin yet had his red lightsaber at that point. I look forward to seeing how the story develops.