Reviews for Torn
Master Darth Warious - Lady of Chaos chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Wow...that almost sounds like me...minus the whole A/P thing...it sounds like you have had an experience near to this...JOIN ME EOWYN! AND TOGETHER WE CAN RULE THE GALAXY AS THE INSANE SHADOWS OF MIDDLE-EARTH!
galabaslesh chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
wow,poor Anakin...somebody needs a hug...*puppy eyes* AARGH! THE FAN-GIRLISHNESS! IT'S TAKING OVER! ARGH-*ahem* sorry you had to see that...excelent story,you've got a real flair for star wars fanfics *applause*
Hobbit-eyes chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
Oh, interesting. I think you've got into Anakin's head really well here. (applauds) Such a pretty head too...

Hordes of girls: Join the dark side, Katie. Sa you only like Star Wars for the beauty of Anakin... you wouldn't have to make excuses on behalf of the ewoks then...

NO! I DO LIKE STAR WARS! ANAKIN MAY BE PRETTY, BUT-

Hordes of girls: Ah, it has already begun... with every passing moment, you become more and more his servant...

(covers ears) Not listening! Not listening!

Hordes of girls: Katie... he is your lust object.

THAT'S NOT TRUE! THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! (pause) Wait. No it isn't.

Anyway. Ahem. Random tangent there. Sorry about that.
Smenzer chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Hey Eowyn! Great little fic. It nicely describes Anakin's confusion about the whole three-way triangle he has going on: the darkside, his love for Padme and his loyality to Obi-Wan and the Order.

But I cant help but wonder where he is while this stuff is going through his head? On Naboo or Coruscant? Night or day, indoors or outdoors?

its also interesting that here you have him consciously decide to turn to the Dark Side - or at least he's thinking about it. For a lot of people it just probably happens (like when Anakin killed the Raiders in Ep 2) in a split second because they loose control of their anger. But to have him consciously decide to go bad would make him a lot darker. Yet its my impression that in this story Anakin seems more sad than anything else...
nextwave00 chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Wow. Very, very nice. I didn't notice any errors in spelling or grammar; your writing is amazing.