Reviews for The Past Tends to Repeat Itself
Kd7sov chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Pretty good. My only complaint is that you included Kraden for precisely one line, with no explanation of how he got there, how Isaac knew him, or what happened to him. Your writing is of good quality and you managed to include the storm three years previously.
Magikarp chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Holy crap. The concept is awesome, and so far, the story owns. I'd like to see more of this.

*added to fav story list*
libby chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
Don't u mean Skorm, Torio? sorry, multi-gamer.

anyway, this is very interesting. wait, if issac reads ahead, won't he know WHY Saturos and Menardi are doing this? so wouldn't he then try to help? and then that would be different from what happens in his book, and the ... ugh, my brain hurts... unless he loses the book. is that going to happen?
DangerDroid chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
you need more detail too between scene changes
Daidairo chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
Really cool! But it needs more details in between.

Good luck!

P.S. The feather should signify the feather of a phoenix, since phoenixes are supposed to be 'healers' or 'immortal birds'.
Innocent Guillotine chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Nice, for an exteremly confusing chapter. But you said it would be answered next time, so...*Takes out every weapon in arsenal* Pick your fate.