Reviews for Bad Faith |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You deserve so many more reviews and favourites! Thanks for sharing this with us and keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am getting a bit nervous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that a proposal? |
![]() ![]() So, who is walking into his death when they go to Romania? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing pleases me more than writers portraying these three well. Their friendship was out of this world and you got it perfectly. Thank you. And now the heartache starts for all as if it already hasn't happened only this time the pain and loss is going to be as close to devastating as possible. At least that's what I think lies ahead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, who is going to face death, other than Hermione, when they go to Romania? Is the Eye also a death trap to those who find it? |
![]() ![]() Your author's notes made laugh. Fantasy sex is more than welcomed so no worries there. Will there be any regrets Draco? Hermione wanted it, but did Draco? |
![]() ![]() Both in character again and how I love your Hermione. Beautiful chapter. |
![]() ![]() I am liking this story a lot. I can't get over how well you portray Hermione. Don't blame her for having doubts about Draco and applaud the epiphany Hermione just experienced regarding his change of heart. Draco appear to be fight on two fronts. One against the Death Eaters and the other Hermione. I feel like he is struggling with how much he cares for Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is superb and this chapter felt as if it belonged right here. I enjoy listening to Hermione's thoughts and could picture her restlessness after Draco kissed. You have a great insight into how she thinks and how she physically reacts to a kiss, for instance. Her interaction with Molly made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There you go! Hermione got an answer. Now what? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disregard my question. This is a post-Hogwarts story and a very interesting one. It just got better. Draco means business and he is risking his life to accomplish his mission which will throw me off too if I were Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this a post-Hogwarts story? I might have read too fast and missed something. Regardless I'm curious as to what you have come up with for one of my favourite couples. I shall continue reading. Elena |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I'm a bit late (12 years late, but hey, I was 4 when you posted this), but it's a very good story and I feel the need to let you know that. And about the Romanian language (I'm a Romanian), if you, or anyone else for that matter, want to write something that includes the language, I'm here to help. It's a pretty complicated language, but I'm sure I can translate better than a site. I don't really know what you wanted to say about that door. The word 'balfaur' doesn't exist, but if it translates as 'dragon' it's probably 'balaur'. Anyway, the story it's amazing so far and I can not wait to finish it. Lots of love from the vampires (I'm in Transylvania ;p) and again, sorry for being 12 years late for this comment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely charming! Had me on the edge of my seat (a bit literally) and moved quickly despite all the heavy spellwork |