Brilliant story, absolutely awesomely done. I found the suspense level extremely high, kept me on my toes the wholehahatime. Loved your story very much, thank you for sharing!

The story is great so far, I just noticed one detail in chapter 12 in the beginning. I'm pretty sure in chapter 10 or 11 you mentioned Bellatrix being dead, but in chapter 12 you mentioned that she is one of the ones that is supposed to be in Romania

First time reading your story and I’m loving it so far! You have created a wonderful new world and time for our favorite characters and I can’t wait to see where it goes! You’ve mentioned in previous chapters that you have been making edits. I noticed in this chapter you have a paragraph that seems redundant (it talks about Fred and George and the struggle of getting into places for Hermione). It’s small, but I felt like it was recently stated in a previous chapter. You are amazingly talented at writing! Thank you for sharing it with someone who loves to read but can’t write worth a damn.

Hello! I just wanted to say I very much enjoyed reading your work. You’re very talented. I hope you continue writing, and I look forward to reading more of your workin the future!

I thought one of the twins dies

Great chapters, love the depth and character development

Unless I missed something isn’t this only the second time they are having sex? So saying “it had never been so hot” may be out of place?

How did they find the death eaters?

How do you follow someone after they’ve already apparated

Thank you for this. Really well written. Just one question, why does she need someone else to let her into headquarters?

THATS all I have to say. My poor heart can’t take this sweetness/chemistry.

Love this so far! So well written and flows nicely. I already love Draco. I can’t believe there’s only 24 chapters this breaks my heart b/c I could read this story foreverrrr.

I've read this kind of "treatment" in another Dramione fanfic (to deal with loss, too) and like that one, I still don't like the idea of poking someone until they explode just so they can "feel their emotions". It feels toxic to me. But then again, this might just be a personal preference when it comes to fanfics.

I got goosebumps omg

Still though the tone matched well. :)

Gosh, so, so, so Draco- the snarky, actually inwardly upset "Good questions, Granger. I'll ponder them."

Great characterization.