I'm reading for the first time and it fit perfectly, and felt like a needed addition of Hermione's inner dialogue as she shorts through whatever happens from that kiss to whatever happens next. Love this story so far!

Hi there,I'm Romanian and I just wanted to say that you spelled "Dragon's door" wrong in our 's actually "Ușa balaurului" or "Ușa dragonului".Hope that clears it up! :)

This is one of the best M scenes I have ever read...and I've read a lot many of them ;)

I have read your story once or twice now and I simply love how you narrate it. It's very real, I see this world vividly, but at the same time it's not overly excessively painted. I honestly liked this chapter just as any other. Obviously also the characters are worth the praise.
I love this story, seriously.

Again, a considered and thoroughly entertaining story. Thank you.

OH NO, ‘heart in mouth’...

Your concern about the chapters is unnecessary. They are consistent. Very enjoyable story...

Love your direct style of writing. Great start, too...

This was so so so good! Thank you for sharing your talents.

Wow I finished and I loved it ! Thank you so much for that story ️

Hello ! It’s the first time I read your story and I’m only at chapter 5 but I’m already hook ! I love it ! I can’t wait to read more !

Wow. That was hot.

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

Time Turner was a little out of the blue for me, but looking back, I can see it. Maybe when Dumbledore says his little spiel about Time, you could have her remember that he said something similar when she got her Time Turner. That would be clearer.

Great. Now I can't erase the picture of Voldy doing salsa in my mind... LoLoLoL. I have a long good laugh, thank you...