Reviews for Ribbons
ForestGuardian311 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
You are by far one of the best SatoRisa author(ess)(e)s on this site. I really enjoyed this. I don't think the classroom scene was out of place (considering the same thing happened with Riku), and though I have not read much of the manga, this seems to fit right in with it.

Great Job!
ShiroiYuki911 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Haha, that was squirmishly sweet :) Feel-good story; it was well written :D
Hana1225 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
hauuu! it's really good!

ah, I really like the classroom bit, I'd like to see Hiwatari in embarrassed state once in a while ;)
Chris LaFey chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
No, no, no!

It was rather good, even with the classroom part-at least he didn't get too far (some authors REALLY push it-so much that I want to beat them up) and Satoshi rescued her.

Thank you for the story!
Lady Fai chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Cute. Very cute.
Ai Star chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
oh boy Kenji
Se7enMusician chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
KAWAII XD that was just so cute! XD
Eternally AquaBlue chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I love it!is so cute!
Wind Scythe chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
OMG, the ending was so nice! nice, man, nice! _
naoko chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Most of it I liked the situation with the secret it was so cute how Satoshi said it...
b4k4 ch4n chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Cute. So sweet and so cute. I love how everyone misunderstands. It's so funny xD Satoshi is so great 'I never said it was white' Well, we like to THINK it's white xD

Haha, even Riku thoght they were going out xDD I'm surprised Daisuke didn't say anything.

"OMG Hiwatari-san! You're interested in girls? Since when?"

Ahh.. fun fun.

Risa's so mean. She oculnd't care less about the ribbon Daisuke had for her? Ah well, he's better off with Riku anyways. Risa's totally for Satoshi. Ahh, such a cute couple. Dontcha just love opposites? xDD

Great work!
windwhisprer chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
This was great. I only got part way through it and I love it, but my plane's leaving. -sweat- Anyway, I can't wait to read the rest of it. So far it's terrific! Long live Satoshi/Risa!
kingdomskeys chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
So cute!
SilverGhostKitsune chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
aw...how kawaii! love it!
heka chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
hey your one-shot's great! :) it isnt really out-of-character, except like you said, the classroom bit where he forgot the ribbon. very unlikely. he would have triple checked and written it in his little black book.

satoshi: I do not have a... 'little black book'.

then?

satoshi: i have a blackberry. (is that what they're called? There's this brand of laptops called blackberries or blueberries or burberry [which is another brand] and i'm screwing my brands up here... ah well. point is he has a top-notch laptop.)

it's still black then...

anyway, i really liked your story! it's great though i really wonder what saehara would do with it... how satoshi would react upon discovering it...

satoshi: I am going to skin him alive.

dark: 7 points for violence, 9 points for possessiveness... krad taught you well eh?

satoshi: ...

yeah! finally, a chocolate chip cookie for you~!
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