|Reviews for DD's Diary Entry|
| Dismayed chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Is this meant to be crackfic? Because taken in any other context, it doesn't make sense. 4th wall broken, incorrect background information, illogical backstory ... should I bother to continue? And DD, speaking several languages, would not make grammatical mistakes in her diary; she's fluent in English.
| DryMartini chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
Hi! great story, it started out good, but maybe you could make longer chapters? I look forward to the next chapter!