Reviews for All those year ago
GryffindorwithFredandGeorge chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Short and sweet is what i would call this chapter. Great intro to the story! the characters could have had a little more dialog but other wise it was good
Moonlight Eyes chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
i love the beginning but wheres the rest? please update or do another chapter cause its really good! i would like to hear what happens next with them to does she love him, do they get married?
roo chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
nice beginning, plz continue
blurrystar1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Is that all? Or have I missed the 'next' button.

Immediately after I read your fanfic I looked for it. I think you need to add more to your story and put a bit more thought into the plot. If it is going to be a romance story through-and-through I'd recommend not making it too cliched.

Otherwise, this fanfic has a good beginning and I think you should continue on with it.
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Hi, Chatny here!

Thanx for giving me this website, another palce to release my creativity!

I think your story has good potential but it needs to slow down a bit. I like the words 'an expression of trust' though.
Sarah Haywood chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
O! You changed your name! _

I think this story is good, but you might want to slow it down a little bit, with the romance and all. Show... don't tell.

It has the prospect of being verily good. _ I'm watching you, O wonderful cousin...

How's life? E-mail me... I keep losing the ones you send me... _ gr...

I miss ya, fellow hermit!

sarah