|Reviews for The New Beginning|
| racingfox chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I really loved this story. Greg and Sara are my favorite characters and I hope that all that flirting that they do on the show will bring them together.
| ScribbleDream chapter 3 . 12/22/2004
What is with the bold? It hurts my eyes. And the writing style is like that of a three year old. And they're out of character. I suggest a beta.
| GreenMint chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Great story. Its real good. But I can't help but to ask you somehthing. Sorry, I am sometimes neurotic when it comes to grammar, but can you please add spacing and punctuation? You really didn't have to put one whole story into one chapter.
Otherwise, I love it!
| MikaelaCheryl chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
aww, this is really good, especially the bit about the baby.
Keep it up.
| Grissom's Monarch Butterfly chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
Great Story! Keep up the good work! I think the pairing Greg\Sara it has potential.