Reviews for The Fuzzy End of the Lollipop
markofcain chapter 5 . 8/3
This was a good read and you had a solid voicing of the League. Good job.
ThePurpleDragoness chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
I really enjoyed this, and I especially love how Flash went back for the other girls at the end. It's so like him.
thesunwillshineclear chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
Woah, this blew me away with it's amazingness. Great job :)
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
/Maybe his metabolism wasn't as speedy as he'd thought./

Oh Wally...Molly...Wally, women have slower metabolism than men, less muscle, a woman with the same habits as a man would have a slower metabolism - which is why we survive in the cold woods and cold water (float better, more protein) on less food better, but stay drunk longer.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
" I swear it was a typesetting thing.
Smaller word, bigger font."

Probably PARTLY why DC did it, although it's also because Nick Fury and Alfred gets to be Mainstream and Old, or Mainstream and Middleaged, and Pretty Girls Heroine DON'T. Blah.

"Ms. Hawk"! "Ms. Invisible" (who did eventually moved from "The Invisible Girl" to "The Invisible Woman", but golly, that might have been because she got married)! Tangent, just realised that Lex Luthor and Lois Lane have the same initials, anonymous notes hijinks!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
I feel for Wally here, I barely know how to use makeup and it just makes you feel clumsy when you are surrounded by a pack you're not a part of.
Trying -Helps chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Okay that was funny but disturbing, I'll leave the order up to you, written well though.
www. /
LadyShinigami12 chapter 5 . 12/13/2012
A friend recommended this to me, and she was right, this is very well thought out, and very in-character, as far as I could tell. Well done, over all, I'd say.
1Superman4Me chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
um...isn't oracle already kind of taken?
obstinateRixatrix chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
I absolutely loved this fic. I've always been a fan of genderbends and good writing, and you've got both in spades! I really did like how there was focus on how each character dealt with it, and the ending was incredibly sweet. Thank you for the story!
xXDNHXx chapter 5 . 5/24/2012
Wow, that was definitely the deepest and most thought out gender-bender story I've ever read. It was really interesting too, their thoughts on the change and how realistic their problems were. Great job! :D

dark hope1 chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Out of everyone's ending, I'd have to say that I like Flash's the best. Didn't think that you'd go that route to help the girls but it really does make sense. Plus I love how he keeps referring to Bruce to help the girls out. Diana's parts were really interesting because now that I think about it, her powers would correspond to her being female. And Bruce having a freak out because he wasn't in control was totally in character. Him and Barbara talking was great. I do feel for him and Dick as well. And John and Shayera had some deep moments in their relationship. I really enjoyed this story. The humor was incredible.
Ally Marton chapter 5 . 1/30/2012
:D That was DEFINETLY a story worth reading. Loved how you moved it, how it flowed and how I couldn't guess what was coming next. When it started, all I could htink was 'HA! Humor! Sweet!' and in fact, that IS what you put this down as. But as the story continued, and eventually ended, it took on a much more somber note. A deep philosophical idea too, for all the humor is in it. Very thought provoking, and as a girl, it certainly made me think.

Also, I have to say I loved how you ended it with Flash's character growing up a bit more, and helping miss Candi out. And Batman's slight character complex when he turned into a woman, and how his fellow 'bat members' reacted. In fact, ALL of the characters had a good 'sub conflict' underneath the greater conflict of changing genders, you did an impeccable job.

Thank you for writing your story and posting it for others to find and read. Both of you. :) Hope you both keep on giving it your best!


Ally Marton
Unkillable Cockroach chapter 5 . 9/16/2011

Basically I've been spending my entire day/night/week (time flies when your having fun, huh?) reading your justice League fics. Normally, I wouldn't do stuff like that without a good reason, eg, from bribery, blackmail, I-know-what-you-did-last-summer, that kinda stuff.

The reason why I've spent so much time reading these fics, is basically, they're good. No, good isn't a "good" enough word (no pun intended, I swear, ugh, how did it come out like that, now I sound like some kind of lame-o comedian) and I honestly don't know how to express myself without spouting bad, flowery, but mainly emphasis on the bad, poetry.

ANYWAYS. The point is, your stories are unbelievably well written. Enthralling plot, phenomenal characterization, basically kept me drooling for more the whole way through. Of course, all good things come to an end, and my only disappointment is that it ended all too soon... yeah, I'm rambling again. (I told you, bad poetry!)

...Just thought you'll what to know that.

Sincerely Seven chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
This was a great story. I feel like a lot of comics will only focus on one or a set of characters, while the others are just there to be convenient to the plot, but this story gave them all an equal amount of screen time and great development. I really liked the serious tone of the genderbender (too many genderbenders are just awkward romantic romps), and I ended up really liking to read more about some of the JL I usually just ignore. You did a great job portraying them all!
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