|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2015
Those lines were worse than terrible in many cases.
| highlander348 chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
I still Dumbledore is a bastard for what he did to Harry.
| MikaelsonChicka chapter 30 . 8/3/2013
You seem to have a... Disgustingly visual and... Devious and cruel mind. It also seems you have a thing for descriptive torture...ish... I love it!
| kat chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Compelling, got right into the story, I'm only about 10 chapters in but so far so good.
The drawback is the numerous errors and the apparent lack of a spacebar which is hard to ignore. Making singular words plural for no reason. You need a beta for your beta.
| taxzombie chapter 2 . 6/10/2012
LOTS of words run together and spelling errors also.
That said it still has my interest. Especially as it is a complete story.
Currently downloading it to my HD and reading it in Word. Also fixing the errors, ie. run together words and spelling errors.
What can I say? I'm a bit A/R when it comes to my reading. I like things cleaned up. You sparked my curiousity with your summary and the events of the first chapter have me curious.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
| fangirl chapter 5 . 6/7/2012
I also disliked Kennedy, but not until she hooked up with Willow. Kennedy was a major step down from Tara. Which reminds me, thank you for saving Anya!
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 50 . 7/31/2011
I finally got the chance to reread and finish this story. . . .I loved it! ! ! !
| RoseXshapedXtears chapter 50 . 11/8/2010
I LOVE your story! Great job. :)
| missimoetzgmail.com chapter 30 . 9/1/2010
Well,that's creepy... n disgusting... Either you love horror or thriller movie, or you just has a tiny bit dark psycho side in your self. But,thanks for the story.
| missimoetzgmail.com chapter 26 . 9/1/2010
It's a bit shock about Amy. First time her name in it,I thought 'do I know this character?'n 'Is it an OC?'. Then when I got the answer,I think I know n agree with Sirius' reaction. Thanks for the story.
| missimoetzgmail.com chapter 22 . 9/1/2010
Nice game,funny tactics,n cute comment. I got laugh so hard till my family who happen near my room thought I've finally gone crazy. Hehehe... Good chappie. Thanks for the story.
| missimoetzgmail.com chapter 21 . 9/1/2010
N now you switch n turn angsty? You're good at surprising me. Thanks for the story. (Grin)
| missimoetzgmail.com chapter 14 . 9/1/2010
I'm so sorry. But for me it seems you really know how to be sadistic. Thanks for the story anyway.
| Cairine the Elf-Hearted chapter 50 . 7/7/2010
i loved it. thank you.
| DreamsEdge chapter 50 . 8/14/2009
wow your story was really awesome I loved every bit, your an really good writer