Reviews for Clandestine Revelations
JediMindaugas chapter 22 . 3/21/2016
Well, the fic is pretty good. The relationship is not rushed, some deeper aspects of it are explored and the concerns and "falling in" are realistic.
The only problem I have is that it is too generic. You could change it to another fandom or swap the names and pretty much nothing would change. If the names would be changed to X and Y, what would indicate that it is Matt and Tai, or even the Digimon world?
RussetPearl chapter 22 . 3/15/2015
Sweet. Fluffy. Nice.
Thank you.
Melmel Phase chapter 22 . 9/24/2013
This was great! But I don't think it should be rated the way it is. Nothing of the ratings nature happened, just thought I'd point that out since I was honestly and perversely waiting for some action. But I liked it and liked how it went. If they were really faced with that sort of situation I believe that this is what would have transpired. The ending seemed a bit rushed though. I detail wasn't like the other chapters. It seems unfinished and while good, didnt seem like a fitting end. But I liked it nonetheless. Very nice work hun
Melmel Phase chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
"Slowly though… a grudging respect had taken root and ate away at my hatred. I had watched him turn a gaggle of frightened, disoriented kids into a coordinated fighting team up to saving the world- sometimes two worlds. I'd watched what I thought was a bratty, control-freak type kid turn into this gorgeous, self-assured guy I couldn't keep my eyes or thoughts off of. Someone who, even if I'd wanted to, I couldn't leave behind or abandon." This paragraph almost killed me. Too beautiful. I love it
SCHWARZSCHILD chapter 22 . 6/8/2012
It simply sucks -_-
Spidersense chapter 22 . 9/7/2010
I know I'm late, but I'm favoriting this. It was very, very cute. I couldn't get enough. Great job.
KeruKeru chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
KeruKeru chapter 4 . 8/24/2010
Say yes Yama, just say yes! :3
KeruKeru chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Yama's either gonna be really happy, or really pissed off. xD
KeruKeru chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
Tai just kiss him! You know you want to. I want you to too, but that's not important right now. X3
KeruKeru chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
OMG! A wet Yama, is a sexy Yama! X3
fallingleaf1111 chapter 20 . 7/28/2010
really love it..can you please write some more digimon fic taito?please5x...i am following you...
fungeki chapter 22 . 4/10/2010
that's a mean ending *pouts* but a great story. still i love the chapter where Izzy asks if Tai's being abused LOLZ
fungeki chapter 10 . 4/10/2010
OMG i've read ten chapters but this is the first one I'm reviewing cause its such an amazing story so far and I laughed so fucking hard when izzy asked tai if he was being abused! LMFAO

best chapter so far!
EpochWulf chapter 21 . 4/1/2010
Well written, but the plot occasionally verges on redundancy. It sometimes feels like the characters are repeating the same thing -without difference- multiple chapters in a row, providing the same effect of reading one chapter over and over again. However, your literary talent is quite impressive in regards to grammar, punctuation and the like. Ending was far to abrupt in my taste though, sorry X_X

Very cute though at times :D

3/5- Creativity

5/5- Mechanical

4/5- Expression

3/5- Enjoyment

Thank you for the read
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