|Reviews for Abandonment|
| sras chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
Odd. Generally I hate ficlets, but I'll make an exception for this one. Most of it doesn't make much sense to me - who is the dead Slytherin? When are we? Whats going on?
But I quite like the surreal fact of that as well, the sheer unreality of the whole piece.
Actually, the part I like best is the very first line - its powerful, very stirring, and emotional. It gets across crushing grief and furious anger in a handful of words. I can really empathise with it, as I don't with flowerier speeches.
Thats all, really. I love it, but I think it should be kept as a one-shot. Keeping that amount of passion going through a full fic would be next to impossible.