|Reviews for You want what you can't have|
| Zoey24 chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Very good story! Can't wait till the next chapter!
| L80bug chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Love the story, hope it's not a standalone! More, more, more!
| JG chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
I'm not sure if I've read this before, but I really enjoyed it.
| JG chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
That was good.
But I gotta say, I'm wondering what would happen next. :)
| Rhasa aka Sarah chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
I really liked this piece. The conflicting emotions were great. I would love to read more. The only sugestion I would make is to encourage you to get a beta or someone to edit your work as a few minor errors detracted me. A great read.
| a reader chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
Fabulous job! This was great! I hope that you continue with this! Max is just scared about hurting people isn't she? She has been it with the worst of luck with those she cares about. CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE!