Reviews for I Wish I Knew
Keirae Huruma chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I like this its very nice. short, sweet and to the point.
penny4him chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I really liked it, I think you portrayed Zaknafein's feeling so well, and the lines really flowed. Nice!
Kohaku Kawa chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
nice. It does remind me allot of Zaknafein. (checks above... Yes I spelled that right!)

You should experiment with different styles of poetry too, see where they take you.

I've tried poems with a rhyme scheme but they don't seem to work.
Iceheart Firesoul chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Yeah, sounds Zak-ish. :'( I liked the repetition. It balanced the poem nicely.
silver thorns chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
(sniff sniff) beautiful, really. just...amazing. (starry eyes, wishful voice) i wish i could write like that...and own zak...brilliant.
Oracle chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
I've read a lot of your writing, really interesting. It really brings out a depth of emotions. Everything from sadness to laughter. For that reason, I'd like it if you could review a certain couple of stories and lend me your insight. They haven't been posted yet, but will be soon by my friend, rpgvaultian. Please keep up the work, especially on Lord of the Crytal Shard.
Kiera Namir chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Wow, that does remind one of Zak O.o;. He was my favorite character, next only to his son Drizzt ) awesome drow, they are.
squirrel chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
I wish I knew why nobody's reviewing this its so god!