|Reviews for Detective B and the monster from the mountain|
| Puppy chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
I've been searching for Creatures stories.
This one seems to be off to a good start. The only thing I would suggest is not using the word "said" as much. Try "whispered", "shouted", "asked", "cried", or something like that. Otherwise, this story looks pretty good to me. Keep at it!