Reviews for Shadow World
Akashi Something chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
I like your topic. And I'm looking forward to good expansions of the plot and character developments of this story. However, I do suggest that you find someone to beta read it before posting, because some of the spelling and grammatical errors give readers a hard time to understand the sentences. I would offer help, if I could, but I'm not that great at grammar either.
Paladin Dragoon chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Kind of foreboding, but it's very interesting. There were a bunch of grammar and spelling errors, though...Try to work on them. _ Update soon, and I'll be back.
LoneGothic chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
Yami, Bakura and Marik... died? O.o Well.. that's um interesting... UPDATE! This is good. Evil has taken over *cackles insanely*
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
I really liked nice!
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