|Reviews for We shall see|
| Nightbreeze Sail Wind's-thought-on-this chapter 2 . 11/29/2004
| AnvilBlue chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
So there's three stories goin' on here right? You've the got the squirrel's horde (led by the ferret though, right?), then the vole an' weasel pair questing for an amulet an' then the rabbit village (which I'm asumming dies out rather quickly...). Well, nice start over all, though I don't think you really need to capitalize species names an' when you're talkin' 'bout more then one beast of a single species you may want to use more then just age, but still you have a nice start, still wide open in terms of plot. Almost sounds like you should have withheld the weasel an' the vole though...
Nice story so far.
| Inactive12345 chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
I don't exactly know what to think of this quite yet... it's certainly different. You seem to have the different dialects down well, which is always a good thing, and you're bringing in rabbits, which I also like, because they haven't been seen much. I wonder why you capatalize the species names, like Squirrel and Rat. Any particular reason? Having a squirrel on the vermin side is certainly unique- I'm interested to see where that goes. One thing struck me as a little off- the whole insults fight among the vole and weasel, it just seemed a little too hare-ish to me. I suppose it works for any type of animal, but it just seemed like so much, only a hare would dare go that far. You do have the language down, and you've got a concept, which is very good. I'd say a nice first chapter.