|Reviews for Come What May|
| Oxygen is a Diradical chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I appreciated the insight you provided for each character's situation. They were well thought out, and nicely written. The tension was perfect in each one, and each problem was explained later on in each story. I only hope to find more stories like these, because there's also spelling, punctuation and whatnot to look for, and it seems you have it all. XDXD
I enjoyed this story. The only thing that had me confused was that you didn't make it obvious that there was another story after the previous, but I guess is like that. If you had inserted a line, I suggest that you check it after uploading it into your Document Manager. I had trouble with that as well.
Again, I enjoyed it. I also liked the drama and the hurt in each tale. Good finish. XDXDXD