|Reviews for Someone Else|
| FireKai chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Hi. This was a great story. I like Risa even if she's sometimes spoiled.
| Tenshi chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
aww that was so sweet, and yes slightly angsty. i really like how you potrayed Risa...poor girl :3. Love it nn; keep it up~!
| ang3l-sh1 chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
The beginning was a deeper look into the character of Harada Risa. Still I happen to think of her as an annoying brat. And halfway through her opinion of Riku shows that clearly. She is immature, arrogant and still very much a child. Are you writing by manga-verse or anime-verse? Because even with her bouts of being spoilt she does show some maturity in the manga, and clearly shows her growing up somewhat.
Still... Overall it is a good drabble. I can see Risa sitting on the balcony dreaming her dreams of fame and love. Her tone is there; laughing gaily, full of self-confidence with a some doubt lingering in the corner; wild imaginations but only involving Dark; especially her 'I-must-be-cuter-than-Riku' thoughts. It's all her.
Like I said, it's a good drabble and I hope to see more of DN Angel stuff from you. _