Reviews for After the Fall
effect20 chapter 83 . 7/2/2013
Now that's epic. I mean I had my suspensions but no motive. Squall and rin weren't together. This is just one huge plate of irony isn't it. Tried to keep them apart permanently but ended up putting them together permanently.
effect20 chapter 82 . 7/1/2013
Hey happy to Arizona was fun. To bad it hit triple digits while you were there. At least there was a pool.

It seems rin figured something out. But it was something that freaked her out. Cid definitely was a lot assholeish than I thought he was going to be.
effect20 chapter 81 . 6/30/2013
Dunn Dunn Dunn the dreaded ate you married / coming back to garden/ who know u ate alive talk.

Zell once again classic
effect20 chapter 80 . 6/29/2013
Wow surtis is kinda my hero. Not for the polictical murders but the one that mattered. It sounds terrible but people like don't deserve mercy. With that said...who in the hell wanted squall dead.
effect20 chapter 79 . 6/29/2013
Kaboom. I don't think sirtis shot squall.
effect20 chapter 78 . 6/29/2013
This just gets better and better. I personally say they leave rin in there with squall . Is it bad that I actually like lareun a lot in thus fic. Her acting rinoa verbally is great. Though squall may kill her fir it. But overall favorite character enventhough it's not over yet is Zell hands down. He can be a funny asshole but also the loudest voice if reason
effect20 chapter 77 . 6/28/2013
That interrogation was very intense. Though he didn't give a reason for killing squall. He definenitely knows what he's doing by not actually admitting to killing anyone. easy

Can't believe I'm almost there.
effect20 chapter 76 . 6/28/2013
Hmmm to easy. Something smells and it's not Zells feet.

I didn't blink not once while reading this chapter. I thought for sure she was gonna die. Let's see what the next chapter brings
effect20 chapter 75 . 6/27/2013
Here we go. Things are about to get interesting. Theres gcoma be a seed that it's stuck in shoot to kill on sight mode.
effect20 chapter 74 . 6/26/2013
Lauren is pretty damn good. It was hilarious how her and squall got right down to business. Zell and his jokes are gonna get him shot... again.

Squall wins this chapter , though with that last line
effect20 chapter 73 . 6/22/2013
Now they are man and wife in a very unique wedding they can get down to buisiness . Catching the killer

And I called it. Squall zombie
Lupa-for-Life chapter 87 . 6/21/2013
ZOMG! I can't believe it! It's over but yet it's not over! Honestly, I'm glad! I was getting closer to the bottom of the page and I was like NOOOOOO this can't be how it ends! But then I get there and YES! At least one more chapter! Although I am sad because now I have to wait... As one author to another, don't let anyone rush your brilliance! You write these beautiful LONG chapters and such an amazing writer and you've created something truly amazing to share with other fans of this game. As I said in the last review I posted: I took a 5year hiatus from and re-found this story in my favorites... I don't care how long it takes you to finish I am SO HAPPY you haven't given up or gotten stuck somewhere along the line and left it unfinished.
Keep up the good work sweetheart!
effect20 chapter 72 . 6/20/2013
Zell as the voice of reason...not likely. But in this case, couldn't have been a better person. Can wait until ellone see she has a zombie for a brother now.
effect20 chapter 71 . 6/17/2013
Like farther like son. They have unofficially officially tied the knot. Wait until they tell everybody and I think Irvine just lost a bet.

Almost there
effect20 chapter 70 . 6/16/2013
That was just beautiful.
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