just sayin' but isn't Virginia Weasley um lyke not ever heard of? what happened to GINNY?

well i like the love conflic, and also the idea that it is not harry and his daughter but amy going though life at hogwarts. keep upt he great work, and will continue on to year 2 now.

WOW! YOu'l get a eveiw at the end of the fifth year so i can sum it up better!

great

that was great mate.

Woh guess I forgot about this for a bit.

cool story. i cant wait till i finish reading it

um... i luv ur story. it is soo amazing.

cool i love your story.

Uh oh. Amy's gonna fail. And she'll die if she don't eat anything.
Well, I'm glad Amy's not going to fail. And so it ends. Darn it.

Your characters have this habit of not wanting to mention certain events, so they go 'how long' or 'since' etc, then refer to the event as 'you know'. I think it would be better if the event was confronted.
Duty sucks when planning a birthday party.
Amy should NEVER call Hagrid a big baboon.
That prediction is a nice one.
A bit of constructive criticism: Generally, don't use net speak or word abbreviation in fanfiction . . . One of my friends, coincidentally also called Amy told me that it's not a good idea - people seem to be turned off by it.
Righta is an unusual name, but I like it.
Pettigrew is rumored to have slept under Percy's and Ron's beds as a human.
The duel that wasn't was awesome.
Why did Amy wish to see Snape?

Has the tenth year reunion come around yet?
Uh oh . . . things aren't gonna go as planned!
Non-Emotion charm? What's the incantation?
Poor Amy - but since Snape got her back, she doesn't get detention. A nice way of really socking it to her. Amy's trying to Dungbomb the Potions classroom is as high on my list as Neville's 'Suit yourself, you bloody ogre' comment.
I thought you said sickle flipping was impossible.

I have a real good feeling that they're dating.
They're staying at Malfoy's? Why? Ah, a shopping attack.
Way below London . . . I never thought that it was.
Richard was not to blame and I'm glad people realise that.
Why is it safer for Abby to be at Malfoy's?

Japanese might be good to learn, as Kari did say.
Well, if she works as an Unspeakable, they're really not going to say that, are they?
Snape actually kissed someone? I agree with Amy.
Rainbow Peeves. Awesome. I wish that she'd not taken it off.

Geoff really doesn't like Marcus.
Nigel can be encouraging when the situation calls for it which is nice; he could make a few friends out of it.
Uh oh. That was not a good idea. A fight is not going to happen then and there. A time and place for everything and everything in it's place and time.
This is getting settled in a mature but embarrassing manner.