|Reviews for The one I love Is...|
| Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
is this finished? Will it be finished? All of the things on the defunct geocities, will they be transferred elsewhere?
| James chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Love Love LOVE TOILI but went to your webpage and it sayas it is taken down :( /cry
Not sure if you even still look on here but by some chance you still do can you email me and let me know if the site will be back up and if not i was hoping if not too much trouble you could link or name the titles to the side stories you and others wrote for the story!
I look foward to hearing from you one way or the other :)
a HUGE fan,
My email is
| edboy4926 chapter 17 . 5/21/2013
Nice that Asuka won, but I was in favor of Rei, oh well.
| ColorlessWind chapter 14 . 11/28/2012
So so so so GOOOOD!
| sk8erry chapter 17 . 8/9/2012
chapter 17 really freaked me out!
| He Who Tells the Truth chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
I don't know if it's intentional, but Rei's coming off as extremely unlikeable and bitchy here.
| Elim Morrow chapter 14 . 9/19/2011
I just discovered this recently and read through it in a day. I've never been a very articulate reviewer, especially with things I like, so I apologize if this review comes off as somewhat rambly and confusing. I love what you did with this story. I've always been in a bit of an awkward position on Eva shipping, since I still enjoy Rei as a character despite shipping Shinji and Asuka, and this story worked so well with her. Good to see a story play with the possibility of Rei pushing past her emotional repression to try and reach out to someone. I cried when Rei III showed up.
The alternate ending is both horrifying and fascinating. The idea of Shinji making his father's mistakes all over again... chills man. Brilliant.
The entire story hit a lot of the things I love most about Eva so well, especially with Gendo, a man I could never completely hate, and one of the hardest characters to write well. I hate what he did for it, and I despise who he became while doing it, but everything he did, every manipulation, every crime, every act of evil, was motivated by his love for Yui. The "I will see you again, even if I have to damn myself and the entire world to do it." kind of love. Except for his dalliances with the Doctors Akagi, which grew from simple human loneliness and weakness. The man is so much like his son that it hurts. In fact, the difficulty of writing Gendo is why I'm not currently planning to write any Eva fics despite adoring the series. You write far beyond my meager skills, and my hat is off to you.
| Kal banga chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Hi Alain, im a fried of Ayanami-san and Souryu-san (Carlos Jacobs and Francisco Neto, two translators of your history TOILI). I a am a brazilian and my english is poor, but i will do my best in this mensage. The Brazilian Version of TOILI have Chapters very diffcult to find, and i want to publishe your TOILI history in a new blog. Please, if you can send to me all the chapters you have i will be very happy, and more ficwriters brazilian will be happy too. I beg you, please, this is very important to Brazilian Fanfiction History, because the first HP of Fanfics in brazil born to publishe your excelent TOILI!
Thanks for the attention!
| Neferius chapter 17 . 3/26/2009
I am simply amazed with this story. I really wasn't sure who Shinji would choose, thanks to your excellent writing.
This story has definitely given me a few good ideas I might use in my own writing to help keep it realistic.
Great work...even though it's been ten years since it was originally started.
Read ya Later.
| Materia-Blade chapter 7 . 6/13/2008
Hahaha! The last omake... Hahah!
Oh god... Haha!
| Andrew Hildreth chapter 16 . 4/3/2008
It's me again.
You must not have much of a life (JK LOL) to have spent enough time with the anime and mangas of NGE to understand Rei so well. Once again you impress me with your writing abilities. And, once again, you impress me as a total genius.
| Andrew Hildreth chapter 14 . 4/3/2008
I take back what I said in my previous review. You are now, simply a genius.
You're right. Shinji and Rei does seem a little too perfect at times (aside from the fact that she's a clone of his mom), and Asuka does present that opportunity for him to grow and change and mature.
Thanks for the great story.
| Andrew Hildreth chapter 13 . 4/3/2008
LIEBER GOTT IM HIMMEL (German for Holy God in Heaven)! What an abosolutely AMAZING story! I've never read anything even CLOSE to how powerful this was. I'm being absolutely serious. You almost brought me to tears at some portions. I could feel Shinji's pain at seeing Rei not remember him. I couldn't stop reading, even when I knew that I needed to.
Now that I've gotten all of the ranting and wacky, uncontrolled praise out of the way, it's time for my personal opinions and critiques. But don't worry, there isn't much that I can say, since I can't write nearly as good a story as you can.
The only thing I can say is that I'm kind of disappointed that Shinji chose a catatonic Asuka over a very alive and well Rei. I understand (I think) why you made him choose this way, though. Shinji has finally grown up and broken completely out of his shell. He has realized that he is no longer a little boy who needs to feel safe. He's now a man who is willing to take chances and make mistakes. I respect that.
I'm glad that you let Misato live through the invasion of NERV. She was always one of my more favorite Eva girls. The idea of Rei coming to her rescue with an AT Field, BRILLIANCE. Good on ya, mate.
The final battle with Shinji, the Eva Series, and Adam...MORE BRILLIANCE! You are a genius! A mad, sick, brilliant GENIUS!
| Andrew Hildreth chapter 7 . 3/28/2008
So...Kaworu's a girl in this version...how interesting. Absolutely one of the greatest Evafics that I've ever read in my life! I can't wait to finish it!
| EternalPKK chapter 14 . 3/27/2008
Dude, I just want you to know, before I read this, I thought fanfics were stupid, poorly written stories with bad plots and never actually took the time to read one. But last year, I came across your site, and couldn't stop reading this one. Its so well written, there are very few gramatical errors, & you managed to have the characters grow and change without losing what makes them lovable in the first place. I mean you actually managed to make it seem like Anno wrote it as an alternate ending to the series. And since I read this, I've been reading fanfics ever since. Thanks!