Reviews for The Rise of the Gray Lord
Guest chapter 15 . 6/20/2022
ok spill it where is this eventual HHr? HUH?!
Guest chapter 18 . 9/22/2021
Wait what there is no more chapters... It was soo awesome I really loved the whole thing.. but now i feel really sad to know there's no ending
Agent 25 TP Odesek chapter 18 . 3/29/2021
Hey, just wanted to let you know your story doesnt "suck", as some people say. I'll say they're all wankers. This story is one of the more 'realistic' or Cannon out there I've found thus far.
Also, the whole Hermione/Ron stitch was one of the best I've read so far.
Keep on writing. And try not to worry too much when you update.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/7/2020
I really enjoyed the story. So disappointed that the chapters ended
Guest chapter 18 . 6/18/2019
Please update it
THAT-GUY-WHO-READS-33 chapter 10 . 3/31/2019
Harry can die. Wdym? The reason he didn’t was because at the time of this fight, his moms love protection thing was still active.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/26/2018
Way too much filler dialogue for me to enjoy this story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
So far I've given every aspect of your story solid 'O's, its really well written, the msot glaring quality for me is your talent for not making the character seem/sound robotic, you make them real and as if they think before they speak, only chapter 1 but thats what I've gotten from Harry's letters to his friends, well done!
Bronze chapter 18 . 12/15/2017
No, the supposed new author has NOT posted a chapter or you posted the last, since '06. Seeing as it's lest then a month till 2018 this is a dead fic. Though it does sound good.
sg1robinson chapter 18 . 8/17/2015
Last updated Oct, 2006?! I am completely hooked on this story and it's been abandoned! The agony! The pain! I need chocolate.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Yay! A nonmanipulative!Dumbledore fic! xD you rarely find these anymore
Mashkai30 chapter 18 . 8/20/2014
I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)
Bjalf chapter 15 . 10/3/2013
Sorry, Katie, good try but not good enough. You turned a good adventure story into not-so-good teenage angst, and then ruined it with bad spelling and grammar. The characters have changed too much, they are hardly recognizable from the previous chapter.
Jedipilot24 chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
I know just enough French to recognize that something wasn't quite right with that headline, so I ran it through Google Translate and tweaked it bit:

Le Ministre britannique a Déshonoré !

Le garçon qui a vécu et les associés exposent Voldemort au monde et au ministère britannique.
Jedipilot24 chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
"A minute or two after his clock displayed 9, he heard a crack that signaled Alastor Moody's departure."
The previous chapter has Dumbledore saying that Moody gets off at 8. Please fix it.
865 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »