|Reviews for Untangled|
| piccolabimba chapter 1 . 5/5/2020
Such a nice moment! Having only read the manga, the other character mentioned threw me off a bit, but it fits easily. Thanks for writing this "short and sweet" oneshot!
| cthulhu-with-a-fez chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
THIS IS THE BEST LITTLE FIC I'VE READ IN _WEEKS_ OKAY I ABSOLUTELY LIVE FOR THIS AND IT'S ~1K OF PURE AND BEAUTIFUL FLUFF OF MY _ACTUAL FAVORITE_ THING? I'VE BEEN HOPING TO FIND A KAORU & KENSHIN'S HAIR FIC FOR _ABSOLUTE AGES_ AND THIS IS PERFECT AND I LOVE EVERY BIT ABOUT IT EVEN THE PRE-KYOTO ARC IRONY BITS
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
This was a great fic!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Tangles are the WORST! This story, however, is great and the Kaoru/Kenshin interaction is lovely. Thank you for sharing, and God bless!
| A Midsummer chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Kaoru-dono as she really is. Impulsive, short-tempered and a bit awkward at times. And Kenshin is Kenshin. Damn, my chest feels like bursting from the accurate portrayal of these two dorks.
| crism79 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Aww such a sweet piece :)) Loved it!
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Yeah what COULD go wrong in the month of may
| pinaydilag chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Beautiful story. Thanks for sharing. I love it!
| pinklatent chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
That was really sweet. Kinda makes me wish for a long-haired boyfriend, hehe. And the foreshadowings were a nice touch, too.
| the.stories.live.on chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
That was cute. reminded me of one of my favorite scenes from Witchy Woman, which by the way is an awesome fanfic for Ruroken. I really enjoyed this.
| Jissa chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
This is a lovely story that manages to be both short and sweet as your summary suggested, but full of hints at the pathos to come. The last sentence truly tugs at my heart like some sort of heart-tugging-thing. ;)
Wonderful job at balancing the fluff and poignancy. It's not something many authors can manage terribly well, but you have nailed it.
Thanks so much!
| Zuzanny chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
That was lovely. :)
| Raven Wolfmoon chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This was a fantastic read! Love just the happy and poignant simplicity of this moment. Everyone was very in character, and this was extremely well-written, particularly the body language and how the mood came across so well. I enjoyed this immensely! Awesome job!
Loved this line, of course: "She brushed tentatively at the ends of his hair. The world didn't end." Aww Kaoru! Love this!
| Shenyu chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Well that was very sweet. You always make Kenshin so adorable in your stories, it's like he knows she's watching him as he hangs his laundry but doesn't really care. Aw.
I love the way you did the ending, it really ties the little story back into the whole storyline like it could've really happened in an episode. :)