|Reviews for The Beginning of the End|
| fatefuldestiny chapter 2 . 10/14/2004
I just have to say this this is one of the most well written Chris stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The emotion you capture in him is incredable.
-"DID YOU HEAR ME!" he yelled now, all calm vanishing in an instant, "DID YOU HEAR ME CALL FOR YOU! DID YOU HEAR ME BEG FOR YOU TO COME AS SHE LAY DYING IN MY ARMS! DID YOU!"
-"Good," he said bitterly, his mouth twisting, "... treasure that. Because I swear to you Leo Wyatt, on her soul, I will never call for you again."
These were my favorite lines and I got to tell you they just tore my heart out. I can not wait for the next chapter, so I'm begging you to update as soon as possible.
| Pukah chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
that was mean and unfair!
Ok, it wasn't. The fic is wonderfuly written and youre very talented.
I've loved the way characters interreact between them and your way to explain it.
But the end... such a mean cliffhanger...
Update! please! (offers cookie)
| nine miles to go chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
| gostlcards chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
You are officially the devil. Update soon please! :D
| PiperPheobePaige chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
Whoa! This is so cool! I luv it! Please update soon! I'll be waiting! I want to see what happens next! !
| Lady Piper1 chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
good start! update soon, its rlly good!
| PrincessLi02 chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
Quick quick continue!
| Idreamofivan chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Very interesting! I cant wait to read more :)
| YoshimiWolfspaw chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
O bad person you're a horrible person, bad place for a cliff hanger, bad place lol now that I'm done whining for a while great story can't wait for an update hint hint
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
| XMindInTheMistX chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
excellent story! write more soon!
| rhia chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
cool fic keep it up
| Alyssa Halliwell chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Wow this is great, I hope you write more soon
| CaliforniaChick chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
o that was such a great start! i ca already tell this is gonna b sucha good fic! im so excited for more! update soon!