karsirium chapter 26 . 7/22/2010
I don't think jack should have forgiven them. He shold be extremely mad. They almost killed him.
Jabri chapter 26 . 3/13/2005
I like this story a lot. So it is a pity that it is already finished. But the end was really good, it was so sweet when Jack and Kim talked to each other.
mav32 chapter 23 . 3/1/2005
I really like your story and wait for your updates every day, please have one soon!
Jabri chapter 22 . 2/23/2005
this story is marvelous. i like it as much as down in mexico. normaly i don't read unfinished storys, but i can't stop reading your stuff, it's to great. please go on writing as soon as possible, i'm so worried about jack.
Daria chapter 21 . 2/18/2005
Please more!I love all your are unique.:)
Jack-rocks chapter 19 . 2/11/2005
Hey Chole, when are you going to update this?

This story is GREAT and this last chapter was better than an Indiana Jones's episode.

So, please update as soon as possible.

The waiting is killing me. :)
siflyby chapter 13 . 1/11/2005
Nice twist that Tony already knew. This is moving along at a great pace here!

You're telling a great tale. Poor Beanie. I'm glad Jack didn't hurt him. I HATE torturer Jack! LOL
siflyby chapter 12 . 1/10/2005
Great action here! well writen, and I can't wait for the next installment!
rozzy07 chapter 4 . 10/26/2004
Love the way your writing this... Love the conflict between Jack, Chase & his demons. Update asap. Thanks for a great read. rozzy
Daria chapter 3 . 10/13/2004
Very dark and promising story.I like it a lot.:)