Reviews for He Who Searches For Himself
Tandom chapter 1 . 5/14/2020
I spent the last week binging this fic, and I just wanted to say how blown away I was by this story. It was great to see how your writing progressed and flourished throughout each of the chapters, and every single moment was a delight. I especially enjoyed the character development you gave to everyone, especially Winry, and also how you took pieces and plot holes from the ending of 2003 and weaved it together into a plot that had a good balance of twists and turns along with tying off loose ends. Even if this story isn’t finished, I was glad I was able to find it and hope that you’re doing great whatever is happening in life. I’m always going to be glad I found this story and remember this as one of the gems of FMA fan fiction. Thank you for writing this!
Lady Eldaelen chapter 43 . 12/5/2019
I always feel like I come into my fandoms late, favoriting stories long after last updates, but I remember finding you and your writing probably halfway through this story? It's been a while, but I lived for HWSFH lj updates. Your art style is one I will forever associate with FMA and Kingdom Hearts, and it was really cool watching you pursue art in school and more professionally. Hope you're doing well and continuing to create awesomeness!
Lloegyn chapter 43 . 10/6/2019
Yuuki Hikari, I know it’s been 8 years since you updated this story, but I just came across it a few days ago. This is hands-down the best FMA fan fiction I have ever read, and you are an incredible writer! Your characterization was spot-on, and not a single character came across as OOC. “He Who Searches for Himself” genuinely feels like a continuation of Ed and Al’s story, and I devoured it from the beginning. You made me laugh, cry, and obsessively reread favorite sections. I’ve been a guest reader on this site for years, but this is the first time I’ve felt compelled to create an account just to tell someone how much I loved the story. Whether or not you ever pick up this project again, please continue to write. You have a beautiful gift.
ReapsymnHunter chapter 1 . 8/5/2019
This is just too good~
Guy in blue chapter 43 . 11/28/2017
Wow I'm gonna miss reading this story. It's an incredibly satisfying sequel and is written incredibly as a new reader I've been reading each chapter solely over the course of like 1 and have months and man I'm going to miss it since the general assumption is that is that it will never be updated so I'm sad and that for the awesome story!
Starbuckkitty chapter 43 . 3/27/2017
I've read this story everytime I rewatch FMA. Thank you for writing it, it's amazing.
Night Phoenix Whisper chapter 43 . 12/15/2016
this is a awesome story uve got so far! please update soon and continue updating
jejuneha chapter 43 . 11/17/2016
I have a big review for the whole thing, just need to get round to sending it off and correcting it :D
jejuneha chapter 38 . 11/10/2016

jejuneha chapter 29 . 10/11/2016
Yep, I logged in again to comment, I plan on commenting on every chapter, I'll need to go back, but it's worth it :D
Ed's growing, yay :D? Oh, NOPE, he just can't laundry my bad XD.
What's missing is it the book, please don't be the book.
More war?, come on Amestris ;-;... Also no military alchemy to be used in war, well that's interesting, I want to know more :).
Is it. Envy ? Adolf Envy ? "Do you enjoy having that voice in your head telling you odd things, Adolf?" YES IT IS AHHHHHH YEHAHHHHHHHHH ;D
Honeheim calls envy it, I can't deal with this oh god ;-; , I guess it's been a long couple of centuries, and type of familiarity to his son is gone..
"Adolf raised a dismissive hand as he stepped back in to join the social gathering, "Have a Merry Christmas, Professor."
Also Al, don't do it, please, but you will, because that's just who you are, why ...
Guest chapter 28 . 10/9/2016
Ed's mothers used to encourage his alchemy, her counterpart isn't her poor Ed .-. .
God, the situational irony of Hakuro saying this to Dante is too much ,"People are devious, honey. Some people are even evil to the core," he shifted his weight to his left side, leaning into the strong arm of the seat, "Those types of people are the hardest to find and sometimes the smartest out of everyone. We just have to find a way to become smarter."
No don't frame mistang for murder, he already killed winry's parents don't do this to the poor man oh no.

WAHAY nice going Ed :D. I mean, the circle is horrific and terrible, but at least you now know why ...
You write the dialogue between izumi and mustang so well, it's amazing , the debate style is so perfectly.
"With a bemused grin eating him up and a teasing jest in his tone, Wilson patted the young man's father on the shoulder as he spoke, "Edward, to be a father, you first need to be aware of how a child is conceived. As you are nearly twenty-two and have been celibate and single since the day we met you, I'm of the opinion that you're quite ignorant to the process. You might want to consult Winry for some clarification."
Early 20th century disses are the best disses ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡ ).
Edward is fine as he is,", well his murder count is lower than yours for now, so yeah I agree .-. :D. Also yeah, taking Ed's hope would probably kill him, good dad Hohenheim ?
Guest chapter 27 . 10/8/2016
(I have a Fullmetal Alchemist hoodie with the flamel insigna in red, and let me tell you, I live in constant fear of looking a bit too edgy, yeah, pre ww2 world wasn't down for perceived satan worship xD...) NEXT CHAPTER WAHAY. (It's 3rd October, well was when I was typing this)
Hakuro is interesting , he was just an average guy trying to live his life and get promotions and never even saw how what he did affected anyone, but didn't really care?
Thomas no, NO, OH COME ON poor Ed ;-; . Hohenheim I know you don't want to go back but you can't just-no ! Is his pocket watch in
In his left pocket? Hohenheim, you better have a good reason for this ...
Ah Pinako, terrifying , also wow, dante is going FAR, contacting Pinako..
Ed and Honeheim DONT know envy can posses bodies yet, i can't wait :D
Sheska yes ily you are awesome yeshhhh :D
Come on izumi, tell poor roy, he wants to know about clap alchemy.
jejuneha chapter 26 . 10/2/2016
"The theory of beyond the gate", well this should be amazingly written wahay :D. I like the small snippets of texts from alchemy books that you put in.i wonder if Dante was used to publishing under a male name, she's been around a while and so \_(ツ)_/...
" I dislike playing chess a great deal."
That line-just yeah dante like being miles ahead any competition, being in full control, not working together to do something, this is dante :D.
Tough love mustang, he and izumi are too alike to not hate each other XD. Yep, Al, you don't want to know about what happens to Nina WOW you do NOT ;-;...
Happy Ed has made my day -
No one interested in this story anymore ? Never. I Want to print this of and be able to point at it when people ask me what my favourite book is ;D
jejuneha chapter 25 . 10/1/2016
I need to know the end of this story, I'm still holding out hope -. I started this story in Saudi Arabia, now I'm in the UK, and if I read this on the train tommorow, that'll be 3 countries that this story has captivated me in.
please never stop writing, just in general, the world needs more people like you:$.
Having half a dozen people try to flirt with you when you just need help must be super annoying, especially at such a time in human history with women's rights being what they were... I don't remember what was in the package exactly, but was it something form Envy? We haven't heard from him in a while, which conserns me, it's like being a a house with a murderous two year old and it being eerily quiet...
Finally, winry is going to be found !
The way you describe dante really draws me in and gives a sense of how unbelievably vain and ancient she is...
The book, oh Hohenheim .-. ...
(Sorry this took me so long to post when compared to the rest of my reveiws (comments? Disjointed thoughts? Meh xD))
jejuneha chapter 24 . 9/22/2016
Yeah, I'm just rereading this, I've read it before but never reviewed properly (this is so good it's difficult to be even partially eloquent when reviewing because of excitement xD)
Poor winry, so cold when it's so hot in Amestris...
"ENOUGH OF THAT!" Mustang bellowed, "if I am missing something then why the hell aren't you TELLING me?"
Ohhh, izumi v mustang , lesson: don't mess with the hughes family or life will not be good...
It's interesting how mustang actually displaying emotions was what made izumi respect him a bit more. Well, not despise him with her whole soul, just- most of it ...
Holy moly, Havoc's in trouble.-.
"Chess piece, sacrificed by Dante, " is wierdly comforting, it makes it seem possible that dante can lose as opposed to her being a puppet master :D.
The question did not trip up Mustang in his exiting stride, "I have never considered myself a proponent of that style of execution; I am not interested in shooting wounded men in the backs of their heads.", yeah last time shot someone that we know if Roy, it REALLY didn't bode well for your sanity .-. ...
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