|Reviews for The Torment of Tantalus|
| shastalily chapter 6 . 10/23/2004
Uh oh.. Is it time for Tantalus to enter Luke's body? Fun story.
| Tiana Calthye chapter 6 . 10/23/2004
Sigh... I can see it... too clearly. (shivers) It's like... like... well, I don't know what to say, but I can say it's creepy, to say the least. There's something... strange going on here, and something deeper than just the Dark Side, if I haven't lost my plot reading ability.
And no person mentions a room without a signifigance... mayhaps that room will be mentioned later...
I think I have a feeling that Mara and Luke are going to keep to canon here... snicker. (evil grin) You appear to almost be working in a bit of romance along side of the freaky aspect... heehee. Keep it up!
| Garowyn chapter 5 . 10/22/2004
Claptrap? That's a new one. Excellent chapter. Heh, poor Luke. I just have to comment on how well you keep all characters IC. )
| shastalily chapter 5 . 10/22/2004
I love how Mara looks at Luke.. like a tasty steak.. Cute. Maybe next she'll decide she wants to kiss him.
| Tiana Calthye chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
Oh. Deja vu. A Shadow...
It's an interesting story, very discriptive... very freaky. I wonder who this dead Sith of yours is, and all that, of course... so many questions... so much to wonder about.
Good story, very freaky. Keep it up,
| Aeriscetra12 chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
great idea for a story. very original
| Garowyn chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
lol, Han...excellent work. Can't wait to read the next.
| Amylion chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
Another great chapter! I love the interaction between the characters, each with their different relationships. I can't wait for more!
| shastalily chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
Ooh...very interesting twist. I love when you do that!
| manda chapter 4 . 10/18/2004
l love this. very unuseul. whose body does tantalus want? update soon
| lady mona chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
wow this is great. cant wait to see who called them there and why. this is cool work. .looking forward to the update.
| shastalily chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
Oh, I like this... Who sent the message? Was it Smenzer?
| Amylion chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
Oh! come on! don't leave us like that and update!
| SSJ-Spiderfan chapter 3 . 10/15/2004
[Offline] Sorry I couldn't review the last chapter! I wasn't able to read the last parts since the page was cut off for me. I'll try again later but this chapter was good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
| Thunderjam chapter 3 . 10/15/2004
hey...this is awesome!
plz plz plz update really really soon!