|Reviews for white, surge red|
| Fanfickween chapter 7 . 9/15
(SPOILER ALRTT DONT READY)
This is so fucking cool woah I saw the mpreg comments and as i was reading i was wondering when itd take place but woah… this is so cool like i cant I love the way you wrote this and how it actually makes sense to me outside the typical of naruto birthing the baby thru his ass XD
| Fanfickween chapter 2 . 9/13
Im really trying to figure out Sasuke’s endgame here. Is he doing this bc he hates/loves Naruto or is this an effect of Naruto’s weird chakra fluctuations
| Fanfickween chapter 1 . 9/13
Omg I love this
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
Cherry Magic! thirty years of Virginity Can make You a Wizard?!
Author : Yuu Toyota
Penguin Random House Canada
a web series
| counter-intuitive chapter 9 . 3/12
Oh wow I can’t believe you’re still updating this story! Do you happen to be on ao3 now?
| pheen chapter 9 . 3/9
i'll be honest, i got emotional when i originally saw the notification for this update: this is, and has been, one of my favourite naruto stories of all time and i am SO goddamn grateful you updated it. crazy to think about the fact that i first read this as barely a teen and now i'm a full, grown-ass adult.
anyway, what a fantastic chapter; loved kakashi finally taking sasuke for his personal training, naruto stepping up and being in charge, and shikamaru being the smartest ninja of all time. the last scene was so lovely; sasuke wants to be there and feel love, but he's just a hurt little baby3
thank you so much for this update, it really, really means a lot and i hope we get to see more 3
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/16/2021
I started reading this in 8th grade I think and I’m now 27, seeing it updates gave me immense joy. Thank you. I’ve always loved your writing style and return to this story from time to time.
| myinuyasha04 chapter 9 . 12/13/2021
Oh man, I was SHOOK to see the update email for this one! It sure has been a long while, but oooh boy, was it wonderful! I’ve been wondering how in the world our boys were going to come back from how desperately broken they were and I’m so glad to see things looking up! I ended up rereading the whole thing again since it’d been a while since my last reread! Thank you thank you for the update! I come back to this one every couple months and it was so lovely to see a new chapter!
| bballandy00 chapter 1 . 10/24/2021
I didn't read this story, however I am just shocked to find a story published before i was born still being updated. That is all.
| Pocky Whore chapter 1 . 10/5/2021
I got a story notification and got excited because I don't often get those anymore. When I saw it was this fic, I honestly couldn't remember anything about it and knew I'd need to start from the beginning. I added this to my alerts, so it must be good right?! ...I am having such a hard time with these beginning chapters. Sasuke's twisted view of dominance over Naruto and all the casualness to rape is honestly really difficult for me to digest. Maybe when I was younger I could excuse away these beginning chapters, but as an adult I am disgusted by pretty much everyone reactions except Tsunade. Jairaiya just brushing rape off really doesn't sit well with me. I could understand the story line of Sasuke's character (even if it bothers me) but the rest of the characters and the univer just feels so extremely off. I am really pushing myself to get further into the story and remember why I added it to my alerts, but I don't know if I can. I am so distracted by just this overall icky feeling that I am getting from Sasuke here and how things are unfolding. I know these chapters were written a long time ago, but they are painful to read. I don't even know if I want to keep reading because I know they'll end up together, and do I really want to read a story where a victim falls for their rapist? If I do end up finishing the story then I will leave another review and let you know if I've changed my mind, but I feel like I need a shower first to wash off the icky feeling that I have from these first couple chapters.
| Sanity Demolisher chapter 9 . 10/5/2021
Loved it! Thanks for sharing.
| Kyuukitsunex3 chapter 9 . 10/3/2021
Wow, since the updates stopped years ago I thought you had completely given up on continuing it. So glad to see you're still updating! I love this story so much as it's not the typical MPREG I usually see with SasuNaru stories. I hope one day Sasuke and Naruto will be able to come together and be a family and I'm surprised Naruto isn't giving Sasuke an even harder time than usual about all the distancing. Naruto is way too nice :'(
| Polkaknots chapter 9 . 10/2/2021
Nothing can quite compare to the exhilaration of seeing a long-absent beloved fanworks author (assumed MIA) pop up once again on the radar. It’s almost a religious experience. If this is how people feel when Jesus was resurrected, then call me a convert!
| Diantaranya chapter 1 . 12/5/2020
this is interesting, somewhat mysterious
| DaylightDark chapter 8 . 10/9/2020
Omg I need more of this