|Reviews for white, surge red|
| NarupokeeAurorafan chapter 8 . 7/25/2016
Please update soon :) ! This is one of the best Sasunaru stories ever :D ! I know it's been 5 years but I still believe and hope your tgere and okay :) ! Please update soon bye :D !
| Bek chapter 8 . 5/26/2016
Well, I really hope this will be finished because I am sincerely impressed with not only the plot but you're very talented writing skills!
| Twerk on Ice chapter 6 . 4/23/2016
"I let him... fuck me"
| Vi chapter 8 . 1/8/2016
Wow, time has passed quickly. Hasn't it, my dear writer. I've grown with this story from infancy and now look at it. It's almost finished and holy moly! - I'm feeling a bout of nostalgia right now. It's good to see this engrossing story is still kicking about, and your stil around *cough* distantly, I mean. Hopefully. Haha. Can you believe it - I was a teen when this story started, now I'm a law student hailing from NYU. You don't even know how many people I've converted to the Sasunaru fandom (as old as it is) through your enthralling fiction. Hope you finish this nostalgic baby of yours, it will be too sad to see something so well-written and fondly thought off. To become a relic of bygone memories and childhood ruminations. Please, please do continue this lovely story and wish you the best. Happy New Year's! Cheering you on from NYU! Xo :) Ciao
Ps. If you would be so kind on the last chapter or epilogue speak of some awesome Sasunaru stories you've read and recommend them. That would be great! Good luck!
| aurrai chapter 8 . 9/14/2015
I just wanted to tell you that I first found this story about six years ago and it's still the best Naruto fan fiction I've ever read. Sometimes I read your writing to use as inspiration for my own writing. You really are the best.
| La Pythie chapter 8 . 8/1/2015
Awww that was painful but the story is really good.
| Hinatauchiha1 chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
ugh really kakashi is just too much always defending sasuke even when he shouldn't he does But if it were naruto he would do nothing I hate him when he's like that
| pramz26 chapter 7 . 2/10/2015
It's very very very good. Hope you will write the ending.
| Kittens Kat chapter 8 . 1/21/2015
VERY INTERESTING STORY! THANK YOU!
| Sukitte chapter 8 . 8/17/2014
You have no idea how much I hate Ino in this fanfic. That is, I "hate" Sakura (or rather their inability to see that Sasuke never loved her as desired), but in this fic Ino surpassed Sakura. I feel that Ino is "a little" homophobic in this story. And the way she treats Naruto ...! Makes me want to hit her.
And I already suspected MPreng since Naruto started to get really hot and only Sasuke was able to calm him down. Although Sasuke ... God ...! As himself.
I love the story and I can hardly wait for the next chapters. Greetings.
PS: I hope that Ino has its deserved, because frankly, she is asking.
| the.nureta.mofu chapter 8 . 6/23/2014
Pleasepleaseplease continue i am so in love with this story you have made
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/21/2014
Come back! Come back and finish this masterpiece! It kills me because you said there's only a chapter (maybe two) left and an epilogue. If that seems like more than you want to commit yourself to write, maybe just compress it all into one chapter so us (and you!) can have closure on this lovely little story? This is truly the most unique mpreg I've ever read in this fandom. Can it even be called mpreg since no one was ever pregnant in the conventional sense? Well, whatever you want to call it, this story is GOOD, and that I can be sure of!
| Tanpopout chapter 8 . 4/16/2014
LOVE THIS SSSSOOOOOO MUCCCCHHHHHH!
TADPOLE-CHAAAANNN! YOU MUST BE SOOOO DAMMMMNNNNN CUTE! TADPOLEEEE! XD cutie little thing called tadpole... tadpolee... lol
*caps off: :p
hope that someday you'll get your ankle sprained and haveeee a loooottttaaaaa tiiiiiiimeeee, you bore and finally willing to finish your fic... *wink*
#running after tadpole...
| Amora.Lee chapter 8 . 3/13/2014
Aw...Shame this hasnt been update in a whole its just getting good
| NaruSasu0105 chapter 8 . 2/2/2014
Great story... but I can't believe you are taking years to update a single chapter... I don't think I can wait ... so I'm just gonna treat this as the last chapter :( Really wish you would update sooner though. What interesting writing style...