Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() mint-o! update soon please |
![]() ![]() well.. i have to admit i'm a mp-reg hater. but... i can't help myself but love this story. dunno, somehow everything makes sense. and i love the twisted way sasuke thinks... and since practically none of them was pregnant it is really well done how you managed to get naruto a baby. aw and then calling it tadpole... thats so cute! i'm a really lazy and bothersome reader, since mostly i won't review but i still beg you to post the next chapter dear. i can't wait for the next one i really like to know how everything will turn out now... you really are an awesome author, making me like a fic with mp-reg (kinda) is like.. a wonder or something. I LUV YA and your writing skillz to bits X3 |
![]() ![]() Wow! I love the darker, more twisted Sasuke. The whole story has a great, original, if slightly scary vibe! But now I'm gagging for some KakaNaru luurve. Does that make me twisted too? Thanks again D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just... wow. I find myself very intrigued by that genjutsu Sasuke placed on the district. I don't think I've ever seen that done in fanfiction, but I love the premise of it. It really shows the extent of his mental degeneration to have the massacre projected like that. I love also that you gave the baby "tadpole" for a nickname. It really does suit a wiggly newborn. I look forward to the continuation if you haven't dropped the story entirely. |
![]() ![]() well, this is like the 4th maybe 5th time I've read this... STILL WAITING for the next chapter. Come on. Just write a half chappy or something, eh? *begs politely but FIRMLY* :) But seriously, hurry up. *whine* |
![]() ![]() I LOVE! this story, tho i took me forever 2 read. I can't wait to read the next part of chapter 7. I must say i did not see that ending coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I read this over again to keep myself refreshed on whats going on in the fic. I hope you update soon. I don't know if I'm wrong, but I have a feeling you might update soon. I could be wrong. Sometimes I'm right. hehe. I enjoyed reading it again. This fiction is highly enjoyable to read. You definately wrote it to where a person couldn't figure out what the hell was wrong with Naruto(definately a good thing). Tadpole is a cute name, I like it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. So this story is seriously intense and you weren't kidding about the WARNING. It's really good though. I'm hoping maybe you'll decide to update again soon so I can see what happens with Sasuke, tadpole, and Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY... i dont know what to say ... im speechless ... it sucks you in spits you out ... i feel like someone washed my brains and left them out to dry ... i cant even think straight... EXCELLENTLY written... dark and ... there isnt another adjective... and you did it well... i never saw it coming! |
![]() ![]() Ah just because I'm used to reading so many mpreg stories it occured to me ages ago. But doesn't mean it wasn't done really really well! :D Much more fox like, than just changing his organs around and wolah a baby. etc etc. Anyway. I'm... missing the next part... can I see it maybe? I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to see the rest of this story! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god i want more *waits impatiently* this is wonderful, btw stupid sasuke stupid naruto just two stupid boys in love damn itachi *prays he dies a painful honorless death* hehe x] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last chapter was so well written. I love this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really well written. I love how you pulled off the baby part, very creative its the first time I've read a story that had what would be considered mpreg but still not be mpreg. And I agree with Naruto, Sasuke is such a coward, it seems as if he has been running away from reality a lot in this fic. I hope you eventually continue this, would love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh save us from the misery that is waiting for your updates! I've re-read this so many times I'm beginning to think I should just write your ending for you to satisfy myself! Oh yes, I need some closure here! |