Reviews for white, surge red
siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 7 . 3/12/2009
mint-o!

update soon please
vege chapter 7 . 2/27/2009
well.. i have to admit i'm a mp-reg hater.

but... i can't help myself but love this story. dunno, somehow everything makes sense. and i love the twisted way sasuke thinks... and since practically none of them was pregnant it is really well done how you managed to get naruto a baby.

aw and then calling it tadpole... thats so cute!

i'm a really lazy and bothersome reader, since mostly i won't review but i still beg you to post the next chapter dear. i can't wait for the next one i really like to know how everything will turn out now...

you really are an awesome author, making me like a fic with mp-reg (kinda) is like.. a wonder or something. I LUV YA and your writing skillz to bits X3
Toikey chapter 5 . 2/20/2009
Wow! I love the darker, more twisted Sasuke. The whole story has a great, original, if slightly scary vibe!

But now I'm gagging for some KakaNaru luurve. Does that make me twisted too?

Thanks again D
Ceirwy chapter 7 . 1/19/2009
Wow. Just... wow. I find myself very intrigued by that genjutsu Sasuke placed on the district. I don't think I've ever seen that done in fanfiction, but I love the premise of it. It really shows the extent of his mental degeneration to have the massacre projected like that. I love also that you gave the baby "tadpole" for a nickname. It really does suit a wiggly newborn.

I look forward to the continuation if you haven't dropped the story entirely.
Slow updaters NEARGH chapter 7 . 1/15/2009
well, this is like the 4th maybe 5th time I've read this... STILL WAITING for the next chapter. Come on. Just write a half chappy or something, eh? *begs politely but FIRMLY* :)

But seriously, hurry up. *whine*
Sora's Voice chapter 7 . 1/13/2009
I LOVE! this story, tho i took me forever 2 read. I can't wait to read the next part of chapter 7. I must say i did not see that ending coming.
xXShadowedfateXx chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
Well I read this over again to keep myself refreshed on whats going on in the fic. I hope you update soon. I don't know if I'm wrong, but I have a feeling you might update soon. I could be wrong. Sometimes I'm right. hehe. I enjoyed reading it again. This fiction is highly enjoyable to read. You definately wrote it to where a person couldn't figure out what the hell was wrong with Naruto(definately a good thing). Tadpole is a cute name, I like it.
Allie-grrl4 chapter 7 . 12/26/2008
update soon
hermit hideaway chapter 7 . 11/30/2008
Wow. So this story is seriously intense and you weren't kidding about the WARNING. It's really good though. I'm hoping maybe you'll decide to update again soon so I can see what happens with Sasuke, tadpole, and Naruto.
Ishanatur chapter 7 . 11/19/2008
OH MY... i dont know what to say ... im speechless ... it sucks you in spits you out ... i feel like someone washed my brains and left them out to dry ... i cant even think straight...

EXCELLENTLY written... dark and ... there isnt another adjective... and you did it well... i never saw it coming!
kimra chapter 7 . 10/28/2008
Ah just because I'm used to reading so many mpreg stories it occured to me ages ago. But doesn't mean it wasn't done really really well! :D

Much more fox like, than just changing his organs around and wolah a baby. etc etc.

Anyway. I'm... missing the next part... can I see it maybe? I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to see the rest of this story! :D
FtMAiden chapter 7 . 10/19/2008
oh my god

i want more

*waits impatiently*

this is wonderful, btw

stupid sasuke

stupid naruto

just two stupid boys in love

damn itachi

*prays he dies a painful honorless death*

hehe x]
Trespasser1307 chapter 7 . 10/4/2008
This last chapter was so well written. I love this fic.
Stoic-Genius chapter 7 . 9/23/2008
This is really well written. I love how you pulled off the baby part, very creative its the first time I've read a story that had what would be considered mpreg but still not be mpreg. And I agree with Naruto, Sasuke is such a coward, it seems as if he has been running away from reality a lot in this fic. I hope you eventually continue this, would love to read more.
Musigu chapter 7 . 9/2/2008
Oh save us from the misery that is waiting for your updates!

I've re-read this so many times I'm beginning to think I should just write your ending for you to satisfy myself!

Oh yes, I need some closure here!
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