Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GUH this is so AMAZING & sexyy in that dark insane kind of way.. which is the best way :D this is srsly my favorite sasunaru fanfic ever. please dont abandon this fict! pleae update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It'sbeenalmostayearsinceyou'veupdated. I think. I'm not good at math. Well. Update. Seriously. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG...this is utter brilliance. Your prose is excellent! I can't wait to read more...I hope there will be more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and I swear that Sasuke is the most fucked up in this one than in any other story I've ever read. I love it. The whole story is so intense... I hope you haven't lost interest in this, because I'm desperate to know how everything gets resolved! Goodbye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know... after reading this for what has to be the gazillionth time (I just love it so much!), I have decided that Sasuke has to be a slight masochist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, god, please post the last chapter. I'm dying here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god this story is so good. You are f*ing amazing I tell you! I love your writing style; almost like you're encorporating stream of consciousness into it. And the way you write is very poetic, somewhat lyrical to me. Your words really depict and help develop the emotions of your characters. This is a very different story, and that's why I love it so much! I like how both Naruto and Sasuke are so messed up, and how you create this love/hate relationship between the two. I'm wondering, from your author's notes, if the next chapter (chapter 7) will be your concluding chapter to complete this story? I'm anxious to see the end result, whether or not the two admit to their love (can I even call it love? :F)? Well, I know it's been MONTHS, and I do understand all writers have lives, but please update soon! Haha I'm so anxious to know. If you get this message, do you mind if you e-mail me back with the answer to my question about if chapter seven will be the last? It's and I can't wait to hear from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm getting the feeling that Kyuubi's manipulated them both. Question is-why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, your prose is lovely. And it flows. Really really fast even when you're trying to slow down and enjoy. Very smooth... W,SR is a beautiful story so far, but it is so ... dark (!) ... I'm afraid to read on, almost. But it's addictive. Like M&Ms chocolate addictive, except you don't worry about M&Ms breaking your heart later. (ANGST.) But... applause, applause, and I do hope you're continuing. |
![]() ![]() addicted to your story-please update soon :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing, awesome, and bloody take on the way Naruto and Sasuke's story could play out. I love it. Crazy!naruto, and crazy!Sasuke may be my favourite things ever. Added to my favourites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah o_O been a long time since updates. you ever gonna finish this story? i so wanna read the rest _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wai, this is something else! full of psychoanalytic, chaotic angst and drama. please update soon, I'm dying to know how it ends. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... I hope you don't mind me nagging you but... It's been months already! This story is great, and although I'm more partial to fluff I like where this stroy seems to be going. I thought that Naruto eating mice was a nice tough! I really hope you update soon, after all, it's like Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship only just really started. Also, I can't wait to hear more about Ino, Chouji, and Shikamaru and how they react when they see Naruto again! Oh God it was just so AWESOME! So, anyway, I'll be personally insulted if you don't finish the story. It's just to good to give up on. So, please, update soon and keep up the good work! Two thumbs up! - Chelbe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boy howdy! To say that the kiddies are fucked up would be an understatemnt. Nevertheless, I'm rather enjoying said fucked upness (is that even a word?) and am looking forward to the next chapter(s). |