Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter Can't wait for the last one Hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() You. You break my mind. It's so stark. The only words I can think of are from Strangers in Paradise: Elegant waste. ABsolutely beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I love you so much! XD This chappie was a freakin' BEAST. Amazingly enough, when Sasuke first noticed the sheets covered in mud I was convinced it was blood. I just knew it was because Naruto couldn't go outside, and even if he DID he wouldn't get muddy because there was no mention of rain prior. Also, why the hell would you want to get all muddy and roll in a bed-a place you sleep T.T; I must admit, though I didn't anticipate it being from him eating mice. I thought he was up-chucking shards of his pelvis or something like that since he said Kyuubi was destroying his body or something. Yes, I read this in school...and had to suppress the urge to gasp .; Heh, I was so confused at first since I haven't read this fic in a while so I was all like "What's HIS problem?" Thankfully my memory came flooding back and all was good :D The next chapter is the last? (sobs) I'll have to make sure I have a special place to read it, then. Well, bye for now. Don't work yourself too hard! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. I love this story. I love the mind games Sasuke attempts to play with Naruto, although he is never really in control like he thinks he is. And I like the way Kyuubi's instincts are slowly becoming stronger and stronger throughout the story. I think you've done a nice job of allowing that to build throughout the chapters. I cannot wait for the next update! I hope it's soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i love this story when is the next ch going to be up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. I can't wait to read more and find out what the heck is wrong with naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats the hotness |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is completely killing me while making me read it, I don't know, but its AMAZING! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic! It's so dark and twisted! Can't wait to read the last chapter! |
![]() ![]() I can't believe I haven't checked on this in so long! I CAN't believe you you haven't updated slag to you, I am just having a rotten day...winter more like. Cheer me up please, update for the love of all things bishie! |
![]() ![]() Um, just wondering if this story was dead or not. My sick and demented mind really enjoyed it so far and its really bugging me that it hasn't been updated in a realy long time. If its posted somewhere else, would you mind letting me know please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uwa. Is sasuke finally beginning to realize that he doesn't hate Naruto as much sa he thinks he does? :X :X |
![]() ![]() wah, i just re-read the whole thing. hope a conclusion is coming. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() these chapters are so long... GO YOU! |