Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn! this is such a good story! And this chapter was funny, well, the last part was anyways. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! And i love how the chapters are so long! Happy Valentines Day! _ |
![]() ![]() i love this story! very fun and interesting and... awesome! keep updating please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *lets out breath* ho.. when im reading this story it's always with a kind of breathless wide-eyed nervous something. your story is awesome and messed up. i love it. dark with angst and lust and aggressive possessiveness and longing. a lot of smex this chapter so thanks for that. ;)im looking forward to the next installment. btw, i really love your title. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So angsty. AHH! Insanity calls. Spare me. xx; |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg omg omg...I...wow, this chapter is just too good...how the characters are portrayed and how you write and how this plot is developing...they're are all too awesome for words. Oomg is just repeatedly going off in my head rite now. I'm so glad you finally updated and I really hope to read more of this soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i shouldn't read this [i'm supposed to be innocent] but messed up sasuke is just too fun to miss! you just updated...so i guess i'll have to wait awhile for your next update. can't wait! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was not your best descision Tsunade. giving him permission before naru knows what he wants is REALLY a bad idea! LOVE the story, update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know to tell you the truth, I was scared to read this. I had to wait at least two days with this sitting in my inbox mocking me before I had to read it to in the very least get it out of my inbox. I don't really know how, to be completely honest with you, to review it. Frankfully I'm disturbed and I think that you are too. That's it signing out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() they played...for lube... WAH! I feel so sorry for Naruto...*sniffles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story...i really loved it for some reason. very well written, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alana: Wow Evo: yeah BIG wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so good I love it update it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() -rubs hands together.- x) I've been waiting for this update. Another kick-ass chapter. o: I felt like hitting Naruto with a rolled up newspaper, though, for some obscure reason. o_O |
![]() ![]() yay! update! *does a little update dance* update update quality update! amazing as usual! every chapter always leaves me wanting more. really like how you've gone into sasuke's pysche and how their relationship is developing. and how sasuke is grudingly concerned about naruto but too fucked up at the same time to know what to do about it. and how in the end it's just easier to fall back on anger and hurt and pride. i will stop short of saying that i love you, but i really do love your work! |