Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() Update now. O_O! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it when it's sort of non-consensual. I'm so used to reading, "ZOMG, Sasuke, I love you. Fill me up :D?", but I love this story because Sasuke is in absolute control, and Naruto hates what Sasuke is doing, but Naruto is still feeling a bit of inner conflict, and he's not being gay about it, but at the same time, we pick up that he's being sorta gay about everything else. And the last few paragraphs really have me thinking... Is he going to "be nicer" to Naruto just to trick him or something? Well anyway, I can't wait for the next update. Like...wuh! |
![]() ![]() I'm your bitch. Can't type more since tension and orgasm ate my head. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg update! Finally! It's been so long ;_; I was already thinking you were going to stop writing this or something... thank god you didn't! I really love this fic, 'cause it's probably the first not-so-happy SasuNaru fic I've ever read, and yeah, has influenced me a bit in my own writing :) Hurray for fucked up SasuNaru! *gives a cookie* Umm, and yeah, update soon ;D |
![]() ![]() it's been so long since the last chapter that i had to read the entire fic from the start, and it might have been better the 2nd time reading it. i forgot how much I loved this fic! it's just so much greatness, it would take me many pages to finish ranting about your supreme brilliance, so I’ll stop before I get started. I hope Naruto’s ass thanks you for the lube. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so fucking awesome. Is it bad I read this with Lion King music in the background? |
![]() ![]() this has got to be the most sik and twisted thing i have ever read. Naruto and Sasuke like this? how long is this going to go on? I mean Sasuke is doing it to HURT Naruto and he is basically ok with that? i cant stand this story it disgusts me! now that thats over. its actually pretty good as far as a story goes. i like everything in it but the plot. So your a good writer, i just cant stand the story. That is unless sasuke quits being so fucked up and actually cares for naruto sometime in teh future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. It's dark and emotion-driven and really well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Naruto's rearranging of furniture. Generally the storytelling has been straight forward and self-explanatory so far... But the furniture bit I just adored. When Naruto goes home after becoming enraged with Ino and just starts rearranging furniture, my heart jumped in happiness. It was just too perfect. You manage to make Sasuke such a *bastard* and Naruto's so loveable all throughout- it's amazing how you keep the character interactions so consistent and true to their intentions. You're SO COOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. UPDATE! I was waiting for forever XD Uhm.. what's the one adjective that can describe this.. BRILLIANT. (But also LSD-trip crazy, y'know?) Sasuke is a chunk of angsty-mental-issues, and Naruto's chakra fluctuations.. hmm. Intriguing. I hope the next update is at least a bit faster than the last (although I understand that you have a life and all, haha, and that, especially with something like this, writing just isn't that easy). But, this story is brilliant, you're brilliant, it's all too bright for me *squints eyes*. _ Hurray! |
![]() ![]() I liky this fic. Especially when Sasuke and Tsunade were talking on the last bit XD update! |
![]() ![]() *snorts* omg... wow - good as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHIT HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN! I've been waiting so long... so long for this. and finally its here! i thought it'd be a complete AU though... never thought the stuff from the actual storyline would still be included! this is awesome. nice sex they have... and i love crazy sasukes... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaa loved the lube poker:P update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy GOD! Chapter 5! YES! I read this story way back sometime last year and was absolutely awed with how you write such wild, savage smexy interactions between Sasuke and Naruto (ToT~ i cry for the fact that so little people can write in such a mature way). Not many people can write such dark angsty stories between these two and keep them in character, not to mention sucessfully deal with Sasuke's messed up pysche AND Naruto's own demons (a.k.a Kyuubi issues) simultaneously. 'am totally thrilled with how you're toturing Naruto but at the same time kept him from the "completely helpless and pitiful victim" role leaving his spunky personality and support from Tsunade's actions in the story. Just love the entire thing! |