Reviews for white, surge red
Jenniyah chapter 5 . 1/24/2006
yes, orochimaru into the mix! ohh update soon please! it's been forever since the last update :(
milktea-chan chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
I cannot believe you updated this story.

I should probably give you some decent feedback, but I'm dumb from readers' bliss. Apologies.
Wistful-Eyes chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
GRAAH. ARRGH. WOWZER.

This story is still the killer. I was glad that Naruto got to fight back this chapter instead of just being "raped". Even if he does want it, I still can't help but see it that way since Sasuke's being a psycho-prick through it all. So deranged... what are his true feelings? xO! The poker part was interesting. Tsunade. Ha.

Orochi, huh? E! How long is this story?

I hope the next update won't take as long! Bye!
MellyPie chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
That was such a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
hogo-chan chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
*melts into a puddle of squeally fool* that was a beautiful update. And... everything's going to change? *shudders in anticipation* gawd i can't wait to read more! you better hurry up with the updatin's!
Smoking Panda chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
Very intriging...PLease write more...-
Ikumak chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
You are my hero! ... I literally laughed out loud at least five times reading this. I love how things are progressing. Kakashi's a real fast one here XD I really didn't expect Tsunade's (nor, Kakashi or Naruto's for that matter) reaction in this. Damn I love this fic. It was well worth the wait and then some. I still can't get over the fact on how well you write. The plot is getting more and more interesting. Darn straight a messed up Sasuke is fun. Loved the chapter, you rock.
story in reverse chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
DAMN, I love this fic! Why is fucked up Sasuke so attractive? XD I continue to love the portrayals and I was definitely wondering about lube during this chapter. Ah, the power of lube shall change everything. ;D
SilverCrystal9 chapter 5 . 1/23/2006
OMG this is getting better with every chapter and I feel those confused feelings with Naruto. You are doing an excellent job of communicating the emotions of your characters allowing we the readers to feel them also.
Pocky Whore chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
Update soon mkay.

i Love it.

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AimeImmortel chapter 4 . 1/16/2006
update soon!
NaughtyRaccoon chapter 4 . 1/14/2006
OMG, holy SHIT! You're just gonna leave us hanging right there? This story's too awesome to not be continued soon! I love your writing style...kinda like following a stream-of-consciousness so that the characters' personalities are more believable even though they would seem OOC comparing to how they are in the anime. This plot is pretty unique as well...I don't think I've ever read a SasuNaru story where both characters seem to act like wild, sadistic animals...hehe, I really like this! Please, oh please, update soon!
Constructor chapter 4 . 1/12/2006
oh! this fic got some real POWER, girl! or boy...don't really know nad too tired to check out your profile for it

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But please do update!

*pretty please?*
KatieW chapter 4 . 1/12/2006
where's the next chappie? Are you gonna finish this or what? This is, like, what all SasuNaru smangst(smut/angst) should strive to be. There is the barest minimum of errors, which makes it even more hella-awesome to read. I'll be very sad if you discontinue it. It's been, what, six months? And Counting!
demonesse chapter 4 . 1/8/2006
i remember i read this ages ago, and just re-discovered it recently through one of those livejournal sasukexnaruto places and one those questions that inevitably reguarly pops up like "what are your favourite sasuxnaru fanfics" and your name and your works always seem to be mentioned.

i love it. was so happy to see it updated and it's beautiful and angsty and complicated yet logical and incredibly in character and just wow.

i think this is one of those fics that will go down in fandon history, one of those defining stories that really distilled what sasuke and naruto are about, that really delved into how fucked up sasuke is but that's really draws naruto to him and how it's a really dysfunctional relationship but it works...

too many run on sentences in this review. it comes from reading too many fanfics too fast...

i just really really really like.. and like and like and like... i hope you update more, hopefully before you get out of college!
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