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![]() ![]() Wow, time has passed quickly. Hasn't it, my dear writer. I've grown with this story from infancy and now look at it. It's almost finished and holy moly! - I'm feeling a bout of nostalgia right now. It's good to see this engrossing story is still kicking about, and your stil around *cough* distantly, I mean. Hopefully. Haha. Can you believe it - I was a teen when this story started, now I'm a law student hailing from NYU. You don't even know how many people I've converted to the Sasunaru fandom (as old as it is) through your enthralling fiction. Hope you finish this nostalgic baby of yours, it will be too sad to see something so well-written and fondly thought off. To become a relic of bygone memories and childhood ruminations. Please, please do continue this lovely story and wish you the best. Happy New Year's! Cheering you on from NYU! Xo :) Ciao Ps. If you would be so kind on the last chapter or epilogue speak of some awesome Sasunaru stories you've read and recommend them. That would be great! Good luck! |
![]() ![]() I just wanted to tell you that I first found this story about six years ago and it's still the best Naruto fan fiction I've ever read. Sometimes I read your writing to use as inspiration for my own writing. You really are the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was painful but the story is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh really kakashi is just too much always defending sasuke even when he shouldn't he does But if it were naruto he would do nothing I hate him when he's like that |
![]() ![]() It's very very very good. Hope you will write the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY INTERESTING STORY! THANK YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how much I hate Ino in this fanfic. That is, I "hate" Sakura (or rather their inability to see that Sasuke never loved her as desired), but in this fic Ino surpassed Sakura. I feel that Ino is "a little" homophobic in this story. And the way she treats Naruto ...! Makes me want to hit her. And I already suspected MPreng since Naruto started to get really hot and only Sasuke was able to calm him down. Although Sasuke ... God ...! As himself. I love the story and I can hardly wait for the next chapters. Greetings. PS: I hope that Ino has its deserved, because frankly, she is asking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pleasepleaseplease continue i am so in love with this story you have made |
![]() ![]() Come back! Come back and finish this masterpiece! It kills me because you said there's only a chapter (maybe two) left and an epilogue. If that seems like more than you want to commit yourself to write, maybe just compress it all into one chapter so us (and you!) can have closure on this lovely little story? This is truly the most unique mpreg I've ever read in this fandom. Can it even be called mpreg since no one was ever pregnant in the conventional sense? Well, whatever you want to call it, this story is GOOD, and that I can be sure of! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE THIS SSSSOOOOOO MUCCCCHHHHHH! TADPOLE-CHAAAANNN! YOU MUST BE SOOOO DAMMMMNNNNN CUTE! TADPOLEEEE! XD cutie little thing called tadpole... tadpolee... lol *caps off: :p hope that someday you'll get your ankle sprained and haveeee a loooottttaaaaa tiiiiiiimeeee, you bore and finally willing to finish your fic... *wink* #chu #running after tadpole... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...Shame this hasnt been update in a whole its just getting good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story... but I can't believe you are taking years to update a single chapter... I don't think I can wait ... so I'm just gonna treat this as the last chapter :( Really wish you would update sooner though. What interesting writing style... |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story you have here. I'm very intrigued. I'm not sure if you're still writing this or not but I'd love to see where you take this next. Thanks for sharing! |