Reviews for white, surge red |
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![]() ![]() please up date soon kay? Thank you for the lemon! Happy holidays and please up date soon. |
![]() ![]() update pretty plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me: wtf?... i kinda like this... it's fucked up. Lee the Sexiful Green Beat of Konoha: *shudders* i always suspected they were *friends* in a SPECIAL way but this is NASTY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say I loved this. Sasuke is painfully vain here but it's not that OOC if you ask me. Man I missed reading long chapters like this. I like the way you wrote this, a lot. I don't really have much to say appart from I'll be here for the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Added to my Abuse C2. Very poignant story. Lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your fic. Hahaha. I think I know what's wrong with Naru-chan...but I will wait patiently for your update! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if anyone has asked this already but is this going to be a male pregnacy fic or is it plain Sasuke is insane and Naruto can't do anything about it. It's a very well written fic if not a little disgusting and creepy. |
![]() ![]() that was awesome perfect so fucking dark/angsty/suspenceful/exciting i have no idea what fucking word to use to describe this and i just fucking loved it please pdate this im really looking forward to it and also r u gonna continue Out from the Inside, cause by the way, is another fucking masterpiece. anyways update both please |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to login, and great fic. :o Looking forward to what you'll be writing next! |
![]() ![]() Ah, shit, this is gonna be MPREG fic, isn't it? And now I cant even quit reading because you're such a good writer that I've been sucked in. Well, hell... *stalks away in bewildered annoyance* |
![]() ![]() ![]() WEE! Smex! lol! Speaking of which, I was on the third chapter of you story when I eran out of time and hat to go to bed so I decided to print it out (13 friggin pages! not that's bad...) and read it when ever I could. Of course "when ever I could" was before classes and in my studdy hall XD Yah, and when I got to the smex parts I almost burst out laughing from the awkwardness of reading such a story at skool and with nosey people. Wow, but it was a blast. Welcome to my favorites list XP |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU have to UPDATE! Please tell me that you have not abandoned this story it is too spicy to be left unfinished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, Sasuke is SERIOUSLY messed up in the head. Now, I know he knows what love and like and all that feels like because, unlike Naruto, he did have a loving family for 8 yearsof his life. Sure, okay, they were brutally murdered and the murderer did royally screw with his head afterwards, but still... I'l be honest. I LIKE your protrayals of the boys. . Sure, they're messed up, but, as Naruto pointed out, neither of them is exactly sane. With all the weird rivalry and dark emotions and competitiveness running between them, I suppose it makes sense that everything else would be just as violent and screwed up. *L* Good work on your characterizations of everyone else, as well. Kakashi comes off with just the right level of completely bored and sharply intelligent. I like Jiraiya's apathetic attitude about the whole thing and Tsunade's over-protectiveness is perfect. Thank you for posting what you have and I hope we get to see the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() just one error... it's not rape, it's sodomization. Forced rear-entry is 'to sodomize'. |