| Reviews for white, surge red |
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   Pointed Teeth chapter 1 . 8/23/2005 wow |
| permetaform chapter 4 . 8/18/2005 DUDE. HOLY FUCK. THIS! ::flails:: it's a bit dark but pretty damn close to how I'd think that any relationship of theirs is going because neither of the boys knows really anything like love and your characterizations for the most part is spot on, or in any case it was a derivation of their characterization that I totally can live with. And it's really really hot. I don't suppose you're on LJ anywhere? ::puppyeyes:: |
| Sakura chapter 4 . 8/13/2005 lol.. its nice n e way u descibe e feelings n actions r great but about tsunade could b better... i mean she is "overprotective" i noe u r trying ur best but... anyway keep up e gd work |
| theGreyPebble chapter 4 . 8/6/2005 WHY won't you UPDDATE |
| sanieSaiyan chapter 4 . 7/27/2005 okay sasuke is scarely in character...BTW this chap made my hands tremble. Kudos to the master. |
| OspreyAnimeG chapter 4 . 7/13/2005 hee hee hee so angsty...and yaoi-ish! me liky me liky very much UPDATE! |
| Gods fallen little angel chapter 1 . 7/11/2005 holy crape! i found you here? what why why arnt you at we love your story! |
| Wistful-Eyes chapter 4 . 7/1/2005 Sasuke is frucking INSANE! And sadistic. This story is so dark, it's unbelievable. But yeah, continue... I need to find out what happens... well, my brain has exploded. I can't remember reading something as twisted as Sasuke and Naruto's relationship in this fic anywhere else. And at the same time, I think I sort of understand Sasuke's crazy thinking. These aren't meant to be insults. I'm just incredibly WOW'ed. And it's an accomplishment when a story makes you feel very strongly. So don't be offended, please. Update soon. |
| curlyalien chapter 1 . 6/26/2005 wow very impressiv hooked from the first chap. it s amazing how you use (maybe even dance with) words n make the characters n everything so lively. this is definitely one of the best storys I ve ever read. |
| Angelline chapter 4 . 6/20/2005 Very confusing story, indeed. I have no idea watz going on. So is Sasuke good or bad? o.O Hah, but please update soon, perhaps I'll be able to clear it all up in your next chapter. |
| annetaco chapter 4 . 6/19/2005 even tho sasuke's crazy... he is damn sexy when he's crazy. _ |
| JustGravity chapter 4 . 6/15/2005 Damn. Damn. That was HOT. O_O This is the first time I've EVER read a fic like this...and DAMN do I like it! xD So much angst...::rolls around in angst happily:: So~ yummy! I wanna eat more... (now for the critizism (is that how you spell it?)) This didn't read like a fic. It felt like the characters were actually real people...The way you organize their thoughts and the way you write their actions, but most importantly the way you write the CONFUSION makes me think that this is actually happening in real life. The way you wrote these four chapters had a very creative feel and "self" (if you can get that...) to it that just makes someone hunger for more. This is the very best piece of writing that I've seen since Pianissimo Buterfly (Gravitation fic, if you like Gravi, you should check it out. _~) and even when you compare with others yours obviously rises above. ...Big ego boost there...Don't get too cocky and forget about this fic though(don't you hate that? when there's a fic you really like, but the author has abandoned it?)! You have to feed the masses! ::stomach grumbles:: |
| Hitokiri-Kitsune chapter 4 . 6/8/2005 O_O This was totally AMAZING. I think it's safe to say that this is one of the few fics that actually stirred up a flurry of inspiration in me. :3 Thank you for something that was like a rough acid trip. XD Horrible and wonderful. _ Update soon! *lurks in wait* |
| jien16 chapter 4 . 6/2/2005 ei...nice story so far... better update this, k? you've obviously got some potential... |
| setsunaxpoison chapter 4 . 5/28/2005 YAY SMEX! |