| Reviews for white, surge red |
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   AncientHistory chapter 4 . 5/27/2005 You're one of the few writers out there who writes in present tense very well (very few writers can do this). But I'm so confused about what's going on, or rather the motives behind their actions. I'm sure you'll inform us soon, so I'm looking forward to your next update. :-) |
| Kit chapter 4 . 5/27/2005 wow, this fic is just amazing! You have to update NOW! Please! |
| shoxkei chapter 4 . 5/20/2005 Yay~ I was waiting for this story to get updated~ And it was great. Can't wait for the next chapter. -shoxkei |
| taggED chapter 4 . 5/15/2005 wah its good... i liked it... wrrite more! lots of love to ya! -taggED Kamu |
| akuma-river chapter 4 . 5/14/2005 Wow. Just wow. So this has like what three or four more chapters. This is, wow. Wow, awesome, incredible. I love this story. The characters are so real, no one is ooc, everything is how it seems in the manga, it just fits. Wow. I think this has become one of my favorite Sasu/Naru stories. This is wow. As for the intro about it being a sort of unhappy love story, if you think of love (romantic love) in its truest form, it can mean only heartache. Because even if, they tell each other, love each other and don't even cheat, they will leave each other, by death or loss. No one is immortal after all. Just keep up whatever you are doing. You still have a few grammer mistakes, a few words added or left out, and mispellings, but hey the story is awesome anyways. Keep up the awesome work, Coolsa. |
| Nicole chapter 4 . 5/14/2005 You have no idea how happy I am to find that you updated this story. :D |
| Gonrie chapter 4 . 5/13/2005 Love it! |
| Dreamer chapter 4 . 5/13/2005 I'm interested to see how this is going to be resolved. |
| TenshiKaitou chapter 4 . 5/13/2005 simply fabulous! evil Sasuke is so addictive to read about. Please update soon. |
| mizuryu chapter 4 . 5/13/2005 Brilliant! Love your writing style, love the pairing, and the hot smex! Write more please. |
| Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 5/13/2005 Alana: Cool! Leo: someones been a bad bad boy! |
| Jenniyah chapter 4 . 5/13/2005 OH! sasuke is such a jerk in this one... I wonder what he really wants though... does he really like naruto, or he likes messing w/ him... hum, hope u update soon :) |
| Yaoilover S chapter 4 . 5/12/2005 *bloody nose* hee hee hee, evil Sasuke!I can't wait until the next chapter! (I hope tha Tsunade doesn't kill Sasuke ;) o/ |
| DDD chapter 4 . 5/12/2005 WOW! i can't believe that you finally updated after ...what seems like years! its really good |
| Tsugath chapter 4 . 5/12/2005 I love this story, it's dark and angsty and keeps Sasuke totally cannon, which I think is what makes it so great. Love the smex too! So I think I know what's wrong with Naruto, but I'm not saying anything until I know for sure. You have really skirted around the issue. |